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  • Loud Papers

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    I like it a lot so far. :)
    September 20th, 2011 at 03:06am
  • Catch.The.Dream

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    You're doing great for your first story! XD and give yourself more credit for attempting the British accent, the way you write it is the same way as many other people on here. Now idk if you already have cowriters, but I'd be willing to give it a shot. Lol you'd be sticking it out with a newbie. But the plus side is I'm a grammar/spelling correcting fiend. Lol can't wait for the next update!
    August 12th, 2011 at 05:56pm
  • ComeOnCloser

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    I love this, and the layout is so pretty!! I've subscribed(:
    July 15th, 2011 at 05:30am
  • november_rain

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    i absolutely loved this chapter! 8D seriously, it was epic!

    yay! bmth and bvb <333 they gonna meet etf soon? xD this tour sounds like its gonna be so rad. and i love how the frontdesk lady Norah is all 'id be a biotch if i didnt let you go'. awesome haha xD i love your sentence structures, your english is better than most people i know that go to my school! xD one thing i can help you out with is when you're saying:

    "I wonder who's roadies will we be." Jade said., you're gonna want to switch the helping verb with the subject. SOOO 'will' is that helping verb and 'we' is your subject, and you're going to end up with "I wonder whose roadies we will be." instead. make sense? =D hope i did, i can get realleh confusing... lol

    anyways, this chapter was amazing, i loved it 8D

    update!!!

    Molz =]]
    April 27th, 2011 at 06:29am
  • november_rain

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    I LOVED IT! 8DDDDDD

    Are they going on WARPED!? 8DD YAY! thats gonna be epic. i love how jade was like >.> dont. look. at. me. i want sleep. O_O lol and uncle tom is rad, dude. THREE FORTY SEVEN PM IS TOO LATE.

    dude, your writing just keeps gettin better and better xD UPDATE, LOVE! <3

    Molly Mental =]]
    March 16th, 2011 at 12:59am
  • november_rain

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    TWO WORDS FOR YOU.

    UP. DATE. O_O <--- my IMEANIT.! face. o_o

    Molly Mental =]]
    February 6th, 2011 at 09:59pm
  • november_rain

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    really good job! the only thing I'd give any constructive criticism on is just a bit of grammar, but then again, I have grammar OCD lol. other than that, this is really great, and I'd love to see what happens with it! keep going!

    Molly Mental =]]
    November 24th, 2010 at 01:45pm
  • cutegal459621

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    Its pretty good.. You should keep on writing.
    November 21st, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • RonnieRadke

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    Sounds interesting.
    Can't wait to see where it goes.
    November 21st, 2010 at 08:48pm
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