Living a Dream - Comments

I like it a lot so far. :)

You're doing great for your first story! XD and give yourself more credit for attempting the British accent, the way you write it is the same way as many other people on here. Now idk if you already have cowriters, but I'd be willing to give it a shot. Lol you'd be sticking it out with a newbie. But the plus side is I'm a grammar/spelling correcting fiend. Lol can't wait for the next update!

I love this, and the layout is so pretty!! I've subscribed(:

i absolutely loved this chapter! 8D seriously, it was epic!

yay! bmth and bvb <333 they gonna meet etf soon? xD this tour sounds like its gonna be so rad. and i love how the frontdesk lady Norah is all 'id be a biotch if i didnt let you go'. awesome haha xD i love your sentence structures, your english is better than most people i know that go to my school! xD one thing i can help you out with is when you're saying:

"I wonder who's roadies will we be." Jade said., you're gonna want to switch the helping verb with the subject. SOOO 'will' is that helping verb and 'we' is your subject, and you're going to end up with "I wonder whose roadies we will be." instead. make sense? =D hope i did, i can get realleh confusing... lol

anyways, this chapter was amazing, i loved it 8D

update!!!

Molz =]]

I LOVED IT! 8DDDDDD

Are they going on WARPED!? 8DD YAY! thats gonna be epic. i love how jade was like >.> dont. look. at. me. i want sleep. O_O lol and uncle tom is rad, dude. THREE FORTY SEVEN PM IS TOO LATE.

dude, your writing just keeps gettin better and better xD UPDATE, LOVE! <3

Molly Mental =]]

TWO WORDS FOR YOU.

UP. DATE. O_O <--- my IMEANIT.! face. o_o

Molly Mental =]]

really good job! the only thing I'd give any constructive criticism on is just a bit of grammar, but then again, I have grammar OCD lol. other than that, this is really great, and I'd love to see what happens with it! keep going!

Molly Mental =]]

Its pretty good.. You should keep on writing.

Sounds interesting.
Can't wait to see where it goes.