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  • oldthoughtsleave

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    I can't wait to see how this all unfolds.
    January 5th, 2011 at 06:54am
  • BLONDE;

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    I think this chapter turned out wonderfully :)

    Can't wait for the next one,
    those two crack me.
    They fight like an old married couple haha
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • oldthoughtsleave

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    I really really like this story and where is is going.
    December 18th, 2010 at 06:08am
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Well I thought it was exciting!!
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    December 18th, 2010 at 01:41am
  • BLONDE;

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    I found the come backs great :)

    I very much loved the update,
    Sad bout her father making her not believe in relationships.
    Her father is a cock
    Just hope that changes for her.

    Any way I freaking love this story,
    Can't wait for the next chapter to read more :)
    December 9th, 2010 at 08:53pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    Lol smartass.
    Love it!
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    December 9th, 2010 at 04:57am
  • BLONDE;

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    I really like this (:

    I am interested, I don't like the V.Ds but this looks good and I wanna know what happens.

    Please update soon.
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:01pm
  • SuperWhoVengeLock

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    0o0o0o00... I'm excited to read more.
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    November 27th, 2010 at 07:47am
  • silk tea.

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    Well firstly, love the banner. Poptarts is fantastic with them.

    I'm interested in what you have, but I don't like the tense it's written in. Present tense always sounds awkward to me especially when it's in first person. Plus, it makes action sequences just sound really stiff and they're difficult to transition. I like the mini history lesson you put in here, and while a bit slow and uninteresting--as all first chapters, I'm still uber intrigued. I'm excited for Tyler to make an appearance.
    November 23rd, 2010 at 07:37pm
  • She Said Poptarts

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    YOU LIAR.
    YOU SAID YOU WOULD TELL ME WHEN IT'LL BE OUT!

    xD loved it!! And I'm totally digging my banner.
    November 23rd, 2010 at 09:33am