Adolescent - Comments

Started this today and I absolutely love it!!!! I can't wait for the next update!!!!!

i love this! update please :):)

Sorry for not reviewing last chapter. She so damn good at updating. I should be doing my character list for homework but I still got a few hours. I had to read your chapter.

So Jimmy was trying to stay sober? I don't think it was right for them to convince him to drink if he didn't want to. Two years or whatever is a long time.

Anyways I loved how excited he got when he was off the phone. Wouldn't they know her age rang since Leana said in the note that she was born when they went on tour the first time? or did she just say when they were on tour and didn't mention which one?

Can't wait to read more. I know this is asking a lot but I would love to read both Jimmy and Hiliary's POV when they meet.

Can't wait for more

PLKAF

Awe Jimmy called her :D and damn I didn't get on for three days or so and there are a billion updates :) can't wait for more

alright well since you did that and left me hanging, now you simply Must update!
love the story!

hey !!! really like the story!!!
cant w8 for the next update!!
XD

Three chapters?!?!?! Wow, I loved the updates.

I like her relationship with Devin. It was sweet. In most stories about the kids either they're a slut or they have never kissed a guy in their life when they meet their rockstar dads. I love all the differences in your story.

And for Jimmy to have cold feet IS very realistic. I mean like Bryon said, she could hate him, spit on him, and then never want to see him again.

Can't wait to see what happens. And is Hiliary's eyes blue?

Hey! Sorry I wasn't able to comment on the last chapter, you're too quick for me ;)

I like that everything is kept so realistic, I can tell you've put quite a bit of thought into this and it's great to see an author really put a lot of effort into something! Usually the kids go straight to their dads and all the drama starts. This is how it'd really go down, and I love seeing it all in Jimmy's point of view. He loves Hillari so much already and all he knows about her is her name, it's so cute!

I can tell he's going to be a great father for her, that is, if she agrees to send out her information. Obviously I'm really hoping that she does, LOL! Maybe having her in his life could be another positive thing... so he won't get back into drugs?

Heh, just my rambling :) Loved this chapter, and the last! I hope you update soon!

I love her reaction. I hate how in some stories the dad abandons them (or in your case it LOOKS like her abandoned her) and they are all happy and it don't matter that their bio father didn't give a shit for sixteen, seventeen years. That was kinda my experience when my dad came back after how many years. he expected open arms and i just stared at him dumbly before running to my friends house.

like suhweet tooth said the fact that Jimmy is the father makes it better than it already is. I have been writing random scenes of a jimmy father story but I'm really not willing to post right now so I also give you credit for posting

You know what I can't believe?

That only one person has commented on this. Really. So, I would like to thank you for writing this without receiving many comments, because I am one of those people who need a lot of encouragement to write!

I've got high hopes for this story, I can't wait to see where it goes :) While I love father/daughter fics, it being a Jimmy one is just the icing on the cake! I don't see a lot of these around, and I think it'd be pretty awesome to have The Rev, out of all people, to be your dad. LOL.

The writing is great. It seems like you've got this well thought out, and the characters are solid. I can't comment on much plot-wise, 'cause it just started and all, but it's shaping up to be pretty rad as far as I can tell.

Update soon, please :) I can't wait for the next chapter!

i love Hiliary!!!
i can't wait to see what happens next
please update soon

PLKAF