Adolescent - Comments

Dude I started crying on chapter 40. I don't even know why

i love this story so much. i havent been on in almost a year and this was the 1st one i've read since i've been back on because i remembered how in love with it i was and still am. the last probably 4 chapters actually made me tear up and that is incredibly hard to do. so all i have to say is, great job and i love it. :)

This was such a good story!!
If only all stories were as amazing as this one.
:)

Awe it's over but I can't wait for the sequel :DD I loved this story and I thought that this chapter was so sweet :)

That was amazing!!! I almost cried cause it was the last chapter!! But i didn't because there is a sequel!

That was such an awesome ending to this story! You're seriously amazing, and I can't wait to read the sequel!!! :)

I loved this story,
I never wanted it to end,
but since there's a sequel....
I'm very happy.
(:

i loved it, couldnt have done it better :)
cant wait for the sequel :)

*sigh of relief* He's keeping his promise!!

I'm sad this is over. I picked this story because it was a Jimmy story and I'm a sucker for a Jimmy story. I'm a Jimmy girl and Jimmy stories are becoming fewer these days =(. So I started with that, then the plot caught me, and then your writing did me in. =)

I love the way you wrote this. The characters feelings were raw and real at all the right times and I love how you took Jimmy and Hillari in baby steps, as it would happen in real life. I know these stories are fiction, but there must always be some realism in our stories. Jimmy did all the right things, even if he messed up a time or two. I want to see how things go in their future for them, because they deserve it so much.

This final chapter was perfect. A great ending to a great story and I can't wait for the sequel!

I loved this story and can't wait for the sequel.

I loved the last chapter, I love the story as well. I can't wait to read the sequel! =)

OMG ITS OVER?! :(
i know it was ending soon, as soon as I saw the chp tittle i was like "i bet this will be the last"
It was so beatifully written also, I enjoyed it very much and I thought you ended it perfectly and at the perfect line too.
The joy and excitment was written perfectly i felt like i was her and cried...
I hop eto get an update about the sequel and hope u put it up soon :P

That was sweet and depressing at the same time. I actually teared up. Anyways, Jimmy better stay alive or I'll kill him...and you.
:)

I leaned forward in my seat, feeling like my world had just crashed around me. An enlarged heart couldn’t be so bad, right? Jimmy just had so much love in his life that his heart had to up in size.
^I lost it there. It's so true :'/
Also the end was beautiful too.
Such an amazing chp.
Update soon!

Youre trying to make me cry aren't you? I hope everything is gonna be okay I really do
Loved it and can't wait for more :)

Oh nononononononononononono.
D:

Dude, same here! I had to keep wiping my eyes in order to read the words! But good chapter...but really is he going to be okay? More soon, please?

Awww:) I teared up too!

Really liked the up-date, I love the story. I hope you up-date again soon! =)

omg :(
i really hope that he sticks round for awhile, and she should get tested, coz she might have it....