That first chapter was....wow...just...wow. YOUR AMAZING! I LOVE THE LAYOUT AND THE CHAPTER AND EVERYTHHING ABOUT THIS STORY! :3 sorry for the all caps there...that's the only way to describe how I felt while reading this story! xD
You've outdone yourself again, can't wait until the rest is out!
I've been waiting for this story, and I'm so glad it's out. :D
I love the banner, but I'm not that fond of the all around layout.
The summary was pretty good, except a bit confusing, I guess.
The storyline seems really well, and I love how Mia is clearly insane and it shows a lot.I loved the scene where she just put the blood in her hair. :3
I saw some mistakes here and there, but you can easily fix them. :)
Great story so far and I can't wait to read more. <3
please write more !