amazing story! I'm really liking it! I'm not usually a big fan of frikey's, mostly cause I love Mikey, haha.. but I'm liking this one, even if Gerard is trying to sink his claws into frank hehe. I'm loving the storyline and the plot! I'm craving more! I kinda like Mikey being the dominating bitch haha, he's just so mean, and its believable meanness haha, but he seems a little feminine with the bitchyness? frank is such a cutie pie, I wanna wrap him up and take him home! haha and Gerard sounds really sexy in this story, Frank seriously will have a hard time picking! so now I'm off to subscribe and hope for an update soon!! (=
Hm, I like it, but i think he (Mikey) is a bit too...dark towards his brother..Haha, I don't know, I just picture Gerard as more of the bad ass, the one who is tough, protective, gets what he wants, that kind of thing. Then there is Mikey, the one who can take care of himself yet always has SOMEONE there for him, the one who is tender, caring and always has more..kindness to give (love would be a little soppy wouldn't you say?). I really like your writing and the plot, and it really is good to be different, so don't let what I or other people for that matter change how YOU look at things. Don't try and please us, if this is how you see something then flaunt it. Flaunt it, scream it, show it to the whole damn world. Oh, and please do update, the sooner the better ;P
omigawd, this is the cutest thing EVER!! ahhh i think im gunna explode from cuteness <33333 i LOVE the whole story (so far) and its amazing! I'm subscribing xDD
uhmm okay so i just found this story & just feel completely in loveeee with it!!! Which is weird cuz i usually only read Frikey storys but i absolutely loveee loveeeee this fucking story! =] just wanted yew tew know that xD & meh opion i don't think Mikey was harsh on Gerard, he loves Frank so much & he'd do anything to keep him safe & in his armssss<33 pweaseeee update sooon?!?! :DDD
I love this. Mikey's brutality is great. Soooo refreshing from the fluff Frikey's that are normally on this site. Tell me if you want a really critical con-crit anytime because I'd love to analyze this for you.
Also, if you like Waycest at all, Mikey's actions toward Gerard reminded me of my last big story before I dropped off writing for a little. It's called Suffer All The Children. Take a look if you're interested.