Can I Be the Only Hope for You? - Comments

I absolutely love this story. please update soon.

Aww my name was said again :D Thanks i shouldnt be on the computer but i had to. Im sick as a dog right now but i can't help but read :):)

You know, it is kind of hard to comment sometimes. It's hard to find words to express yourself without being misinterpreted or hurting anyone's feelings and sometimes I feel like if I can't say everything I think or feel that the rest will be misleading or simply unhelpful and unsatisfying.

Anyway. My honest comment is that Gerard seems prissy and like a bit of a flat character from mean girls, Frank blushes too much for me, I like Mikey but I don't understand how his relationship with Frank is so obvious and yet so unacknowledged without any seeming conflict to hold him back. I don't know why he lies to Frank about liking his brother. And none of this really matters and I am willing to overlook for sake of story writing craft/entertainment and also I agree that the image of what you wrote about Gerard being a diva has something about it that makes a person want to smile. I also agree with someone above that it feels weird when Gerard and Frank are not together, they are OTP, but I am looking for a writer that can make me believe in Frikey, I think that would be a feat. I am way too forgiving of Gerard. There is always hope for him in my mind. Maybe if he was in a coma or something, lol. Then I could believe in Frikey.

Okay. Can't take these words back after I hit submit! That's another thing about commenting.....

LOL XD at Gerard acting like a diva. Frank and Mikey are adorable. I love it and you just brought about a whole new use of kisses. Update soon. <3

Hehe, Gerard the diva.
But even though Mikey's my favourite, I just think Frank and Gerard should be together. It's weird when they're not.

i really really really love this story. and you. and your mom.

just kidding. ;D

unlike the comment two up from mine, i think gerard should stay. ;Dbecause i'm a sexy bitch

Gerard? A diva? Neverrrrr :)
This chapter was sooo cute! :)
I loved the whore Hershey Kiss thing, it was the cutest! :)

Awww no I want Frank and Mikey to stay happy. Go away Gerard!

this is beautiful ;D much love for this chapter, as well.

Dude, i love this already.
You're writing is mature and enticing- just simply amazing. I'm also into the storyline. I can tell it's going to be fucking GREAT. :3

Update soon, wont you?

This is really good. I like it. I want more. Update soon. <3

There I feel loved sorry bout that last comment :(... but mayb you could check out my Gerard story tell me what ya think :)

AWWW YOURE WELCOME!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for puting my name down ther

I'm really liking this story so far =)
You have a very nice writing style and you describe everything well !
I love the chemistry Frank and Mikey have in your story, but since it's a love triangle I guess Gerard is about to ruin the fun. As much as I love Gerard in real life, I have the feeling I'll be mentally killing him while reading this story xD
Ooh and you chose a really good part as summary for your story, made me really want to read it!

OH MY GERARD I LOVE THIS!
Awwwwww, Mikey is so cute when he is angry xD
I'm sure Frankie won't leave poor Mikey boy for his older brother. That would be just mean... D:

oh, frankie, you made me such a sexy bitch. (; it's quite endearing.

I really like it so far :)

Great story. I can indeed feel the plots flowing from these first two chapters. I hope nobody gets hurt. Okay, that's inevitable, it is a love triangle as you said. In that case, bring on the pain (i.e. update soon ;))

this is quite stellar. you're lovely.

You have no idea how much I loved the first chapter of this. It made my heart leap the way Frank loves Mikey so much! ♥__♥
I absolutely loved it. Tell me when you update, yeah?