Ambushed Love - Comments

Wow, that's just amazing, i subscribed and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

C'mon... please don't make us wait for the next chapter! I will wait...

Whoa. I really was not expecting that one.
Good job, you two.
Really.
:D

Awesome second chapter, and although it's written by two different people, I like how your writing style is similar and it really flows well. (Y)

Could there be any more suspense? D=
Poor Mike... I mean, seriously.
(Lucie, you really are evil to them. :tehe: )
I can't wait to find out who's taken her...

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ooh nooooo. :O

Looooved it!
Can't wait for more, this story is amazing. ^_^

OMG so cool! So much detail in everyword! I DEMAND MORE! *falls of seat*

Aww, I really like this one. I'll subscribe. :mrgreen:

Finally! An excellent quality Green Day fanfiction is back on the new stories list!

Well, Lucie, you know already that I adore your writing (I'm slightly jealous that your first co-written story on Mibba wasn't with me. :tehe:), so I will give this story a quick, simple critique (take pity on me, authors, I haven't been fully awake for the past two days).

Very real and down to earth. That's the sentence I would use to describe your first chapter. It doesn't leap straight into the action- at least, not until the very last line. Usually I detest cliff-hangers (since I write way too much of them myself), but I think this one was used appropriately. I also really liked the banner put up on the description page :D.

So there you have it, two cents from a zombie. Enjoy! :D

Oh my Jeebus.
This is so...realistic.
I fcking love itt!!!
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dude- anneliese- thanks so much for telling me about this story- i have a feeling this is going to be awesome <3

I can't just look at your list of stories and leave even though I already saw something new. :tehe:

Of course you know what I'm gonna say, I LOVE IT! And, Anneliese is your co-writer... :file: GD fans unite. :XD I know your writing goddness (:tehe:) AND, Anneliese made it better.

It's well-written and the details are awesome! The chapter one is made by Anneliese, right? Please tell her I love her. :shifty

Okay... and for the biggest moment..

*subscribes*

I'm definitely subscribing, too. Amazing writing and an amazing plot! Can't wait for more. (:

HOLY CRAP! this is awesome! I'm definitely subscribing!

*subscribes*

BRAVO

WOW!!!!! I loved it.. I did steal the comment vigiginty first guys-But my freaking net died.. Anywyas...

I loved it, *subscribes to it* The last line was so awsome! it's full of suspence and it is also a kind of cliff hanger a bit,. lol.

But I really liked it and the lay out on the summary page was brilliant!

I demand more!!!!!

Wowzers.
Srsly, this is awesome, and it's only chapter one so... :wow:
I love how there's hints for upcoming tension through it, especially with this line:

"She turned back to face the interior of a now eerily-quiet house. Yet the peace was not to last forever…"

Which really, is making me just want to know what's gonna happen to Britney. :cheese:
Damn cliffhanger.

But the chapter is laced with skill and talent, so as I said above, roll on the next chapters. (: (Y)

Sorry for the crap review comment. :/
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This is me and The Brightside's new story, titled Ambushed Love. Hope you like it.

Comments and love are much appreciated.