One Last Breath - Comments

  • kjqHD

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    I love this!!!! Aww she was a dancer
    I love noahs point of view but I still wanna know what skylar is thinking sometimes like if she doesn't really like to get close to many people what about Noah?
    Prob doesn't make since but this is awesome!!!! Update soon
    December 22nd, 2010 at 01:20am
  • the end has no end;

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    OMGosh!!! That was soooooo cute!!! <3
    December 21st, 2010 at 04:01am
  • breezybrig

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    Aw :( I really don't want her to die, I'm becoming attached
    December 21st, 2010 at 03:55am
  • kjqHD

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    Aww this chapter was so sad!!!! And wonderful I'm somehow a little glad he didn't go in while she was dancing! Update soon!!
    December 19th, 2010 at 06:43pm
  • billygibbons

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    this story is so amazing, I love Skylar's optimism and wry sense of humor :)
    I'm definitely subscribing :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 05:14am
  • the end has no end;

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    "I'm a growing woman, damn it, I need fattening sustenance!"
    Haha I LOVE that. You tell 'em Skylar!! ;)
    December 18th, 2010 at 11:21pm
  • breezybrig

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    I LOVE it. I can tell that she really misses dancing! Please write more, this story is so great!
    December 18th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • Invisible Princess

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    awwwwwwwwwww
    December 18th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • The Last Dance.

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    I love it. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.
    December 18th, 2010 at 08:34am
  • the end has no end;

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    Awww! She wanted to be a dancer!!
    Wow. That's so sad and beautiful at
    the same time. I can't wait to 'see'
    the video ;)
    December 16th, 2010 at 05:32am
  • StarWeaver

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    I love this story!
    The concept i great and very touching.
    I cannot wait to read more.!(:
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:19pm
  • breezybrig

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    I actually LOVE this story! :D
    December 15th, 2010 at 11:04pm
  • the end has no end;

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    Wow. That brought tears to my eyes!!
    December 12th, 2010 at 03:19am
  • breezybrig

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    This is actually amazing. I came upon it randomly and it is such a wonderful yet sad story.
    December 11th, 2010 at 09:11pm
  • poison and wine.

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    God, this is fantastic. Update soon.
    December 11th, 2010 at 08:20pm
  • Invisible Princess

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    im hooked already ;p
    this sounds like its gonna be amazing
    i love skyler's attitude about it all
    and how she just takes it all with a smile
    update more soon please!!
    December 7th, 2010 at 03:46am
  • the end has no end;

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    Dude Skyler's personality is just awesome!
    Oh noooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! 'Die withing a year' ?? grrrr
    that's so sad!!! :'O
    update soon!
    this is literally my #1 favorite story (:
    December 6th, 2010 at 02:04am
  • April Showers

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    Yay new update!!!
    I am kind of sad that she doesn't have much longer....okay, Im actually reaaaaallllyyyyy sad about that! I wish they got more time together!!
    And that he promised he would stay was amazing. I bet no doctor ever did that before.
    Can't wait for the next update! :]
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • WelcomeToMyWorld

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    Although I know it'll be sad ending, I can't help but love the story :)
    Update? :D
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:20pm
  • Shadowsgirl

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    I already love where this is going!
    :)
    please update
    December 4th, 2010 at 01:40pm