One Last Breath - Comments

  • atomika wave.

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    I can't wait for the next update!
    This story seems really unique, great job so far:)
    December 3rd, 2010 at 09:32pm
  • the end has no end;

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    I love the name's Skyler and Noah! And I love how you always leave the end of a part so that I freak out and wonder what's gonna happen next. Like in chapter one, Skyler's POV it ends with the Because Becker's Muscular Dystrophy has no cure. Dun dun dun DUN! lol XD
    Julia makes me laugh and I love her, she's awesome (:
    Skyler is really cool and amazing, strong-willed and kind.
    Noah sounds like a really down-to-earth, nice guy who truly cares about his patients.
    I LOVE this!
    December 3rd, 2010 at 05:57am
  • April Showers

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    hahaha yeah. it's a good song, at least in my opinion. i grew up listening to Creed . . . :]
    And I doubly like this story, now that the second chapter has come out. And I get a kick out of Julie! She is definitely a hopeless romantic. x]
    December 3rd, 2010 at 03:16am
  • April Showers

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    omgomgomgomgomg
    do you know creed's song one last breath?
    because i think, so far, if my predictions and all are right, that this kind of describes the story... :]
    December 3rd, 2010 at 01:02am
  • The Last Dance.

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    Yeah!!!!
    This is really good :)
    Just thinking about weak muscles on your legs gives me the creeps. I love to run and walk and move around. I want you to update this!
    December 2nd, 2010 at 05:57am
  • April Showers

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    This seems really good! I'm subbing. :]
    December 1st, 2010 at 03:27am
  • hachie

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    YAY first to comment!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I already love it!
    But man Skylar didn't have the chance to start living her life because of that disease and she loss all her friends, well if they were true friends they would have stayed there and helped her through it.
    I see that her and new best friend love to gossip and I love the part with the doctor comment since it's them that long to go through medical school they've aged alot more.
    Please update soon again, I look forward to it!!!!!!!!! XD
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:13am