omg i loved this! this was so good! though i was kind of hoping charlotte would end up with oliver, i'm still happy it's at least not like every other story XP great job!!
I wanted the ending to be cliched so badly, I almost cried cause Oli didn't get the girl. I was like "awwwh, after a speech like that, i'd leapt into his arms in a matter of seconds." partially because I'm a hopeless romantic but also because I didn't like David. He seemed so artificial and so unhuman, walking perfection. I feel like you should write a sequel about how Oli copes with it or something. You're a bloody brilliant writer. Boo at Charlie :(
I love the way you tied everything up at the end. Mel's back in the picture, Oli redeemed himself, and Charlotte ended up with David :) Through all of the lies and jealousy that took place over the course of the story, it's nice to see that it worked out so nicely.
Not what I was hoping for, but it was what I thought would happen eventually. There wasn't enought there for her to be with Oli. Lovely ending, though. Also, as a side note, I'll second that Danny Worsnop suggestion!
HOLLY SHIT (scuse the language) I seriously want to read the next chapter like NOW!! I truly LOVE this story and I'm sad that it's almost over :( And for the new storry I suggest you write a fanfiction about Danny Worsnop from Asking Alexandria :))
I don't want to see Oliver in the next chapter. I NEED TO SEE OLIVER FUCKING SYKES IN THE NEXT CHAPTER.<3 great update! :D I can't wait for the marriage scene. o-o I HOPE OLIVER BURSTS IN TO RESCUE HER FROM DAVID! :D :D :D :D :D
Despite how small it was, the bachelorette party seemed like it was fun. Still, if Mel was there, I can't help but think it would have been a lot more lively.
On another note, talking about an old flame before a wedding can do nothing bur stir up a bit of trouble. If Oliver shows up, David and Charlotte's wedding will be one for the books.
P.S. In the matter of your new fanfiction - which I can't wait to read - I'd like to see some old school Bill Beckett, like Almost Here/Santi time zone. Or any member of Forever the Sickest Kids...
I'm sorry I haven't been commenting as much as usual, love. I've been a bit busy. The chapters you've posted in my absence were very lovely. I can't wait to see if Oliver shows up at the wedding and what he'll do if he does show. Another soon?
Wow. I didn't expect something like this as I start to read this story.
It's so stunning. I really can't explain how much I love this story. I'm really excited for the last chapter. Anyways, you really made a good job. Keep going.
Although this was a filler, I enjoyed the insight on Char and David's relationship. They seem like such a happy couple.
On another note, the fact that Charlotte bought a bridesmaid dress for Melanie was a bit disheartening. It's such a shame that they still haven't made amends.