ooooh aaah. please, i love it. continue! ps, have you ever thought about doing this story in oliver's point of view? do you know how crazy us readers would go if you did that? please may i ask, consider it. (:
im scared that the longer she waits, the angrier Mel will be when the truth finally comes out. and the truth always comes out. gur stupid oli and his stupid puppy dog facesD:
Oh, Oliver. You got yourself into this mess, now you've got to figure your way out of it. Sure he has genuine feelings for Charlie, but he went about pursuing them in all the wrong ways.
I'm crossing my fingers and hoping that he doesn't manage to make things worse.
this is really great story! I like how you don't make it play out into a cheesy love story like everyone else. I hope David doesn't get hurt :( Love it!
Chapter 19: Karma hurts like a bitch, doesn't it Oli? That's what you get for being a dumbass! Update soon<33333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333333
Well that complicated things now, didn't it? I looove this chapter, and yes I do know I said it for all of the chapters but it's just because they're all awesome and because you're an amising writer :) ♥
Chapter 18: I swear....it's like Oliver has no shame at all! He kisses Charlotte in her boyfriend's parents' house. He admits his feelings towards her while she was just trying to get over him. If he liked her before, then why the fuck would he go out with her best friend?! His head isn't screwed on right!
Major props to Charlie for stopping things with Oliver. Although she shouldn't have kissed back, I'm glad that she came to her senses enough to leave and go back upstairs to David. It's nice knowing that she still values her relationship with Mel so much.