Of Misdemeanors and Murder - Comments

Your backkkk!!!! It was like you leaving quizila all over again!!! <3 yay :3 I wub yewwww!

YOUR BACKK!!! NEVER LEAVE ME AGAIN!

Ahem... just wanted to say I love this story. It's entertaining, well-written and original. I been stalking this story way back, since the quizilla days. :D
I reread the prequel and up the sequel where you left off.
It's soo good and addicting. I won't pester you with saying I want you back. I'm sure you get that enough.
I thought it was interesting that I tell you that I was really inspired after reading this story that I... decided to name my dog after the main character. xD
Anywayz, I rarely comment on stuff so this is awkward, now I shall go back to lurking in the shadows. :)

I miss you. Please come back.

D:

Brooooo. Where are you?

I love this! I'm looking forward to the next update.

I liked the banner and then I was like "wait a minute... is that Kristen Stewart?" and then I liked it less.
>_<
BUT HOLY BALLS YOU UPDATED! It makes me want to dance around in circles and not get the urge to kick small, yappy dogs.

Ugh, I missed this story so much! Can I just say how much I love Hayden and Raven and I JUST HAVE SO MANY FEELINGS OKAY. I can't wait for Raven and Derek's "date" and drunk Hayden, Leon, and Damion- there is no way this will not end in hilarity.

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.

Hayden, Hayden, Hayden...did you think you could teach her how to swim???

Well, I bet he can. Since now she's determined to leanr how to swim...haha.

This chapter was freaking AMAZING. Kind of like a filler, but it greatly amused me and I can't wait to see what comes next! Haha. I'm sure whatever it is will be pretty good! :)

I was laughing so hard when Raven almost drowned, bringing Hayden down with her. I pretty much had tears in my eyes, so either that scene was ridiculously funny or I'm a little slap happy from my cold medicine, but either way I really enjoyed this chapter!

Gosh, I miss this story. I'm so glad you updated! The developments are really interesting. I really don't have much more to say because you should already know how much I love this! Haha :)

As for Derek...I still don't like him.

XD

I'm in looooove!!
I can't wait for the next update!

<3 Clarissa

Hi :) I just read both of the stories and I completely LOVED them haha =D I can't wait for the next update!!!! You are an amazing writer =D

Gosh, I just love Raven and Hayden's story/relationship so much. Raven is great and I can't wait to read more and more!

Okay, surely you've gotten my *completely obnoxious* comments from my rereading.
I was just thinking about Hayden's sister//the necklace being a plot strand....and how Raven needs to complete the bet with Derek. [[I'm trying to pick what's better: him running around in a dress, or Hayden getting pissed and ruining their date. ]]

Also, 'Raymond', who hung out with Dame, Lee, and Hayden disappears and a few months later a blonde chick who looks like him appears and hangs out with Dame, Lee, and Hayden. How does no one notice this!?

[[[In the fifth chapter Raven turns on the TV and it's the news reporter talking about gang activity and I feel like she *might/should* be more sensitive to the topic because that's how her brother died.]]]

I'm super excited about Leon's little sister. Maybe she can snag keep Damion distracted. And she'll like him too and Leon will be like "no! D<" and his sister (Anna I think it was?) will be like "YOU CAN'T STOP ME BWAHAHAHA" and will be found cackling in corners (except not really)

I'll try to leave you alone so you can actually write now.

Dude. you updated and I've never been more happy in my life.

I waited SO LONG for this chapter. MONTHS of coming on and checking my subcriptions and being disappointed. Don't ditch us again, okay?

OMIGOSH.

UPDATE.

SQUEEEEEEEEE.

Ahem. Anyway, I really loved the update, even if it was a filler. I'm really curious to know what's going to happen, so I hope you update soon :)

P.S.S. You should consider uploading this story on Wattpad(:
just a suggestion.