Of Misdemeanors and Murder - Comments

I'm sooo HSPPY!
You finally updated!(:
Please update soon!

<3 Clarissa

PS Imma read the first story all over again! Ahahah

Man, where did we leave off? I haven't read this since you last posted....
Okay so. Here's my prediction of what's going to happen.
She's about to actually play pool against Derek and then Hayden's like "nooooo~" and all jealous and she's like "why is he acting like this? being secretly in love is my job" and then she plays pool and it goes either way. the date would make Hayden jealous but the endless possibilities of Derek in a dress sound pretty sweet. He could be winning and on the last ball knock in the 8 ball instead and epically fail. I don't know.
anyways. he's all jealous and then there are awkward times because they're roommates and there's pranking and then --the guy whose name I can't remember but the one who used to be in love with her but got shot down-- is like "man. I'd love to make you suffer for the pranks you've pulled on me but in this situation your stupidity is just too painful to watch" and helps his bro get the girl.

Or there could be some thing about her getting kicked out and into the girls dorms because some RA type person sees her come out in a towel to yell at them for putting blue dye into her shampoo. or something of the sort.

Maybe hopefully my ramble of possibilities will help inspire you. :D

Are you going to update?

I love this! Please update soon!!!

NOOOOOOOOOO! I've spent the last three days reading Of Thieves and Do-Gooders. I can't get enough! You need to update soon so that i can continue reading. Please? And I'm also super excited for whenever Hayden and Raven are going to admit thy like each other. It was a bit frustrating hat it wasn't in the last story. I'm feeling the need to flip to the back of the book, but there isn't a back yet. :(

Oh. My. GOSH.

I had to re-read the others to remember what had happened so far!!! And I really, really want Derek to be in a ball gown and put on youtube or something...(cough cough) but I have a feeling that it will be, like Hayden thought, the time that something goes wrong...but hopefully the guys will follow her and Derek if that happens. Just in case.

Anyway, please don't leave us waiting forever again!!! Love this story sooooo much that it took a lot for me not to squeal when I saw the update XD

Until next time!!! :)

Ohmigod, I cannot believe it took me this long to figure out there was a new chapter. You are amazing, which I think I've said before.

"Excited to see how Raven and Derek fair in that bet, not sure which person I'd like to win."
I second that. Of course Derek in a ball gown would be pretty amusing, but oh the possibilities... xD

You're alive!!!! Yay!! ♥ I was all worried :P

I really wish you would update more often as well!

Anyway, chapter four was awesome. I love Raven, she's hilarious and her attitude is one I'd like to have. Awesome task as well, typical Raven jumping to that landing. :) Excited to see how Raven and Derek fair in that bet, not sure which person I'd like to win. It'd be funny reading about Derek in a ball gown, but then the endless possibilities of Raven and Derek on a date!

:o Please update as soon as possible!

i loved it :D and i really wish you would update more often, all in all a really good chapter

J'espère vraiment que vous mettez à jour bientôt. Je ne apprécierez la lecture de vos storys sovery beaucoup. Vos personnages semblent vivre de manière similaire a je. J'aime que ce sont des gens relatable en passant par des choses non rattachables. Il est d'une telle lecture intéressante. S'il vous plaît mettre à jour très bientôt, comme ce soir!

~Rose

<3
That (^) about covers all I have to say on the topic of your writing... Uh, yeah. Bye.

Update soon? :D

<3 Clarissa

Yaaay for releasing the prisoner :P Loved it, loved it, loved it!! ^^ Freaking amusing, I don't get how you can come up with this stuff. It is incredibly FUNNY! I can't wait for more, but this time, I won't nag. I'll patiently wait ^^ .....Oh and thanks for the kind words you left at the bottom of the authors note :D Truly, you know to compliment, haha xD

OKay, I'm ready for chapter 4 :)

ZOMG an UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, now that that's over (and I really did make a 'squee' sort of sound when I saw the notification that you'd updated, just saying), I loved the update! I don't think there was anything weird with the chapter. Just that there was epic amazingness that needs to continue sometime soon, ne? :)

Love this story SOOOO friggin' much. You have no idea how pumped I am about this sequel. Keep up the good work!!!

I love this. Seriously. :)

Loooove it! Oh please oh please oh please update sooooooon I've been waiting forever for this!!!!!! PLEASE! I FREAKING BEGGING YOU!!!!

OKAY

So I really do love this, and I adore the layout, the banner is lovely, the story is lovely, Hayden is lovely, Raven is lovely, you are lovely. And at the risk of sounding horribly desperate and quality original fiction deprived--PLEASE UPDATE.

That is all, for now. ;)

I'm so glad you didn't end the plot! And thank you for not making Hayden and Raven (ZOMG! THEY RHYME!) suddenly "fall in love". I freaking love your stories so much and I remember reading Of Thieves and Do- Gooders until 5:00 AM just to finish it. And I used to get so angry because you didn't update quickly enough, but the chapters were worth the wait.

Your writing makes me envious.

KEEP GOING!