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  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    thanks its just that i couldn'e tell whether was just having a flashback and also being raped. but i understand now
    November 4th, 2011 at 07:51pm
  • hachie

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    So she was raped by someone that she worked with????
    Wow and watching the video where Syn was doing the same thing to a woman just brought back memories for her.
    That's why she is very guarded and doesn't socialize much.
    I look forward to the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    November 2nd, 2011 at 01:33am
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    that bit in the end is very true but i kind of don't know if she was talking about herself in the last paragraph did he rape her?
    November 1st, 2011 at 07:59pm
  • Johnny B

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    Confusing.

    Buuuuut I like it :)
    November 1st, 2011 at 02:01pm
  • bloodravyn

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    this is totally creepy, but i love it
    November 1st, 2011 at 12:11pm
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    is the girl on the tape still alive?
    October 22nd, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • hachie

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    I am very confuse by this story but I love it!
    I am wondering why they kidnapped her and alot of other questions.
    But this story has snatched my attention big time!
    And JImmy seems to somewhat crazy since he thinks that Mera is Leana!
    I cannot wait for the next update!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    September 26th, 2011 at 03:34am
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    i really want to know what haoppens next
    September 6th, 2011 at 01:34pm
  • NaiveDove

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    id prolly shut down
    August 30th, 2011 at 03:31am
  • NaiveDove

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    Im Not Sure What To Make Of This But Update Soon(:
    June 26th, 2011 at 10:00am
  • mello2727

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    yay great update :) can't wait for more
    May 9th, 2011 at 04:09pm
  • shadows vengeance

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    really liked it cant wait for more
    May 9th, 2011 at 03:48pm
  • foREVer Synyster

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    really like this ! :D cant wait for more
    May 9th, 2011 at 02:30pm
  • xxbrittxxx

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    i was sooo excited this was updated! The first chapter was great and the second didnt disappoint. i cant wait until Shadows is back in the picture. i have a feeling things are going to get more interesting. Loved it!
    March 23rd, 2011 at 04:07am
  • mello2727

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    Awesome update! I loved the ending of this chapter too :)
    February 24th, 2011 at 02:10am
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    oh i hope u don't cut of the womans limbs
    January 22nd, 2011 at 10:58am
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    love the story by the way
    January 16th, 2011 at 12:49pm
  • Ora-Witch-Dreamer

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    why is the story called secondary spine?
    January 16th, 2011 at 12:47pm
  • xxbrittxxx

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    Wow this is really well written! I totally enjoyed the first chapter and absolutely cannot wait for the next. Just the right amount of excitement to leave me begging for more!!! Lovely start!
    December 31st, 2010 at 08:45pm
  • mello2727

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    Awesome, please do continue :)
    December 27th, 2010 at 04:52am