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  • skinticket89

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    What you have so far is great, you should definitely keep this story going!
    December 2nd, 2010 at 08:38am
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    This is really good. I love your details and how you don't give away names right in the beginning, well, except for Johnny. But seriously, keep writing ^-^
    November 30th, 2010 at 07:38pm
  • NaiveDove

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    This is extremely good. Amazing details and a good story line. It leaves me wanting more.
    November 30th, 2010 at 12:51pm