October 3rd, 2016 at 09:07pm
For such a short piece this was detailed enough and straigh to teh point. The way you went around of who the moster really was before Lee's eyes and the irony of his father dying by the switchblade he himself had given to Lee added to the piece. Well done!
-Marian.
I feel that this displays what happens in the minds of children that come from broken homes. I am actually glad that Lee killed his father because the justice system fails so many and when it comes to something such as abuse from a parent/guardian I couldn't hate anything more. The irony of the switchblade made this all the more perfect because of how Lee imagined the father at such a young age.
You're incredible at conveying emotion into a small amount of words and I will be reading more of your works after i get through more of my Halloween treats.