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  • Andie.x.Stone

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    LOVE THE NEW BACKGROUND and BANNER!!!!! Any chapters soon? =D
    December 19th, 2010 at 08:38pm
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Ah! I love your background and banner!

    Lol, I was just being bored and decided to check for an update and saw the new layout.

    It's beautiful!
    December 19th, 2010 at 08:27pm
  • ToastAndJam

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    Nice update. :D I'm really enjoying how the story is progressing. I love Emma and Burke together. They're just too cute. One thing I've noticed though, is that you really don't need to put who's point of view the story is in. It's technically in third person and so not in either of their points of view. You can just omit that and it'd be fine. I also don't get why this story was reported. There are a few mistakes, but they look mostly like typos - nothing to get reported over. But it should still blow over because there isn't anything major enough.
    December 19th, 2010 at 12:46pm
  • Hannah-Monique ;

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    Ah! I love it! This one is definitely my favorite out of all your stories :3
    So, I'm commenting, just like I said I would.
    In fact, I'm going to try to comment on every chapter from now on.
    Sound good? I think it does. :D
    December 19th, 2010 at 08:49am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Sorry, meant 'leaving' instead of 'living'

    I'm a blonde, lol
    December 19th, 2010 at 07:15am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    I TOLD YOU THERE'D BE CLOSENESS!

    Cookie to me for my ESP-ness when it comes to this story.

    Cookie to you for so many updates, you pretty much rock : )

    I think Santa should be the one living YOU cookies and milk (and extra large presents) this Christmas.

    Oh, and I was reading the other comments and got to LilyPrincess96's first comment and was like "That sounds really original and smart and awesome... and familiar."

    Took me a while to realize she was quoting me.

    Cookies to her for making me feel awesome and smart!

    'Cause I don't think anyone's ever quoted me before : )
    December 19th, 2010 at 07:14am
  • el_5oc

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    Yay update~
    December 19th, 2010 at 06:26am
  • Andie.x.Stone

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    I think I might just write a comment every time you update. Loved this chapter!!!!! And I didn't see any spelling errors, so if anyone reports you, tell them from me to go suck it. ;) Keep updating. This story is worth it. And the writing block thing? With all the comments you're getting, I think inspiration will come to you soon.
    December 19th, 2010 at 05:05am
  • giada;

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    This story is my new favorite :)
    December 19th, 2010 at 04:07am
  • Just_QueenPaige

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    um change the color and picture of the banner for the story. u cant read the writitn with the pic. nice chapter
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:47am
  • Secret__Crush

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    this story is good (: except its hard to read with the bright background picture and the dark word box. keep writing <33
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:27am
  • Andie.x.Stone

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    Heyyy! Me again! So whoever reported you (not me) for spelling is an idiot. A story like this shouldn't be reported, I mean honestly. But there are some spelling errors... Usually the author doesn't notice them until someone else reads the manuscript. That's why there are editors. If you'd like someone to proof read for you, I would love to. I'm the grammer guru according to my friends. I edit all their papers. << There's my resume if you want to use me. Anyway, waiting for the next update. =)
    December 19th, 2010 at 03:11am
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    oh yh...........and you are forever awesome for putting up that link =)
    December 19th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • Unspoken_Lies

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    "Drat.

    There goes my plans of happily ever after....

    WAIT!

    Light bulb! Burke will now have to comfort Emma!

    Which means closeness and hugs and loving words!

    And CLOSENESS!

    Cookies for your brilliancy!

    (Yes, I know brilliancy isn't a word, now hush if you want your cookies)

    : D" ROTFLMAO................=D

    Yh really sad, but I liked it.......they're getting close!!!!!!!!
    Reeeeeaaaaaaaaallllllllllly wanna see what happens, so hurry up and update for Pete's sake!
    December 19th, 2010 at 01:51am
  • minidiva12

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    AWWWW!!!!
    December 18th, 2010 at 06:18pm
  • el_5oc

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    Im really liking this!
    December 18th, 2010 at 06:38am
  • iLOVEmyipod2

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    OMG!!!! I am SERIOUSLY HOOKED!!!! you have to update please!!!! ^_^ I like read all the chapters you have posted I'm waiting for more?!?
    December 18th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • Jaguar's Heart

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    Drat.

    There goes my plans of happily ever after....

    WAIT!

    Light bulb! Burke will now have to comfort Emma!

    Which means closeness and hugs and loving words!

    And CLOSENESS!

    Cookies for your brilliancy!

    (Yes, I know brilliancy isn't a word, now hush if you want your cookies)

    : D
    December 18th, 2010 at 05:38am
  • Andie.x.Stone

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    Heyy so I just started reading your story today!!! BEAUTIFUL!!! I'm one of those obbsessed Beauty and the Beast fans that has to read every version there is. Anyway, keep updating! I'm excited for this! And I never usually say this but thank you for being sick so that as I was reading chapter 9, thinking it was the last one for the day, I got all excited when chapter 10 suddenly appeared. =)
    December 18th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • Plan To Live FoREVer

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    Awwwww....how sad...he never woke up...that's soo depressing...!!!! she's gonna be terribly sad...!!!
    December 18th, 2010 at 03:23am