There's Always a Catch - Comments

I was wondering in chapter 14 if I was having problems counting or you were c: " I slowly open my eyes to find five people in my room. Paul, Jacob, Seth, Bella, Edward and Alice"

@ celestial_royalty
Hiiiiii, thanks so much for this! :D I was fairly suprised to see such a lovely comment, this story is so old aswell haha :) but yeah thanks very much and yeah I should do, but I'm just too lazy haha, like you say - on a free day maybe :)

Aw that's brill! When you get it up, post me a link or something and I'll definitely check it out :)

Well...I liked it! Surprisingly. It had a lot more of a motherly setting than a romancy one. Here are my favorite parts: 5- “Nice car” I comment, smirking and Bella was about to protest until she saw my own rust bucket parked on the driveway.“Yours too” she replies smartly 10-“Paul! Go jump off the cliff!” I say and I realize how I worded it 20- I was thinking of La Push jokes...lol. I mean, come on. All that pushing of the baby and you know...La Push. It was right there! Hahahahaha. There were some scattered spelling errors, so I suggest looking through the story and editing whenever you have a free day. [: This inspired me to write a story of my own. Or rather, start one- because I always start and rarely finish. Hm...Yup, adoption story coming up now! If you ever can, please let me know what you think of my writing too. Oh, and I don't recommend a sequel. I like it just the way it is.

i loved it, you have to make a sequel!! one of baby ruby and another wolf who imprints on her. personally maybe collin or brady since you never mentioned them in the story so maybe when they first meet her bam! imprint! and paul being the father that he is becomes overportective and angry! or something like that, but please continue with this!

Amazing story.
I read it twice (:

Sequeall!
It would be cool if it was about Ruby..
Maybe one of the guys imprint on her?

Like, Seth? Or Collin, Brady.. xD

I loved it! a sequel would be amazing!

amazing story! I had to read it all in one sitting I was so hooked :)

AWE!! this is a cute chapter!

awe :) perfect ending!
of course i wanted it to go on longer.. haha.

maybe you could do a sequel with Ruby as the main character, and seth or someone imprints on her? that would be great to see how Paul would handle it :D

yay! awesome story :D

A sequel would be awesome this was such a good story I'm sure the sequel would be also

aww I'm sad to see it go!!!
you should make a sequel. :) that would be amazing.
I loved this story one of my favorites. great job!

Awww yay :) that was so cute :) and I would love a sequel :)

Amazing ending!
Couldn't have been better. :)

Aww :) They are so cute :D and I can't believe Alex left for good! :( hahaha I like evil XD

amazingly amazing!

aweeeee such a cute chapter :D
this made me smile :) paul's such a good daddy.

i think you should give one or two more chapters with Ruby growing up and everything. it would be funny to see paul get all protective over ruby. ooh! or maybe seth or embry could imprint on her 0.o

AWWWWWWWWWW <3
Paul's such a good daddy :')
Ruby sounds adorableee :D
update update update ! :D

How about a time skip?
Or, you could end it soon and start a sequel?
I don't know.
It seems this story has all that it needs. :)

aww Paul is too cute with Ruby. :)
I love this chapter.
please update more! :)
keep up the amazing work!