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  • Lijgirl1328

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    oh boy :D i inspired something?! :D i feel so... powerful...

    haha. next chapter is gonna be epic!!!!!

    you NEED to update soon!

    this was a great chapter, btw :D awe. her and bella made up :)
    December 8th, 2010 at 06:26pm
  • allzac

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    Haha glad i helped you write something. It was a good chapter :)
    December 8th, 2010 at 12:45pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    yay an update!! I can't wait for the baby to get here!
    keep up the great work!!
    please update again soon!
    December 8th, 2010 at 11:54am
  • Lijgirl1328

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    This is like the best story in the world :D I'm so addicted!

    SOOOOOO sorry I haven't been commenting regularly. My proxy for school got blocked so I've spent all yesterday and half of today looking for a new one.

    this story is great!
    hmm.... i like the name Lilly. but yeah :D and I don't think alex should be nice, I think Paul should kick his ass! that would be epic. haha.

    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TOP UPDATE SOON!?!?!?
    December 7th, 2010 at 07:43pm
  • Brunette Vengeance

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    Lovely updates.
    I was secretly waiting until Alex showed up.
    Keep it up and can't wait for more.
    Especially when the baby comes!
    December 7th, 2010 at 06:35am
  • allzac

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    Bell can come and complain about how she wants to you know "Do it" with edward LOL nooo im joking i don't really have any ideas because its your book :)
    Good update though :)
    December 7th, 2010 at 01:37am
  • shaylove

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    Paul is sooooo sweet :)
    December 7th, 2010 at 12:39am
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    This was AMAZING! i wish everytime i had writers block it would end like that. lol keep it up
    December 6th, 2010 at 10:52pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    ^ I agree that Paul will make an amazing father.
    Just curious, but do you have a name picked out for the baby?
    I'd love to help out with that if haven't already picked a name out.
    I love coming up with names! :)
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:13pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    Another great chapter!! This was very sweet and romantic. <3
    Paul's going to be a great dad. :)
    Keep up the great work!!! update again soon please!!!
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:11pm
  • allzac

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    LOL!! Fav line from that chapter was when paul just woke up.
    “What’s wrong? You in labour?”
    that made me laugh :)
    December 6th, 2010 at 03:49am
  • CaesarSalad

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    Alex better stay the fuck away!
    I'll cut his head off and not the one sitting atop his shoulders. lol. xp
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:28am
  • shaylove

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    I prefer bad Alex... :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:31pm
  • Cassie Rosalee

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    Paul is amazing! I agree^^^^ and this is my favorite story on here so far(: good work
    December 5th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    keep alex the way he is.
    Paul is just so great in this story, so caring! I love it! :)
    thanks for another great chapter! Keep up the great work!!
    update soon please! :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 08:48pm
  • CaesarSalad

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    Fuck Alex!
    He can go jump off a cliff for all I care.
    And not one the boys go cliff diving off of. >:
    Anyways, loved chapters 13-15.
    Great updates.
    Can't wait to see what happens. :)
    Dun-dun-nun-nun! Paul to the rescue! :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 06:55pm
  • shaylove

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    O.M.F.G. I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!! Alex is back!!!!! :O :D
    December 5th, 2010 at 05:12pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    It was just starting to get really good!!
    keep up the amazing work!!
    update again soon! :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 04:33pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    gasp! Could it be?? I'm not going to say who I think it is.
    update soon!! :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 04:07pm
  • Kristalynnxx

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    aww he surprised her with a nursery!!! :)
    keeps getting better and better but who is this mysterious person??
    Cant wait to find out! update again soon!! :)
    December 5th, 2010 at 03:15pm