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  • NeverLettingGo

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    CONTINUE?! I like this story, I like it a lot. Its soooo funny!! And super interesting.
    January 20th, 2012 at 05:20am
  • teenagedream91

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    HAHA That is pure genius! Travis bringing a tranny home serves him right for looking around even though him and Ally aren't together there is something there. You did good at writing a funny chapter and I did laugh when Danae shared that Greg is 'big'. It's funny yet embarrassing at the same moment I remember a few friends sharing those details with me can't look at the boy in the eye ever again. I can't wait for the race and see how Travis reacts when he loses because come on Ally has waaaay more experience that he does. Thanks for promoting my story in this chapter love you :D
    September 28th, 2011 at 06:14am
  • teenagedream91

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    Travis is still a sweetheart even though she told him to sleep on the couch. Ally should have known that Travis will comply to what she said he doesn't want to make anyone uncomfortable and would do whatever they say to make them feel better. I would feel icky too if I laid on a bed where my friend and his cousin did the dirty. Ah dirty thoughts get out! XD
    It is a con with Travis his bad temper when he loses but his pros outweighs his cons. It was a great chapter and made me laugh, got a few stares from the by standard but it's all good. I'm insane anyways. :D
    August 22nd, 2011 at 04:39pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Denae sigh it's alright if she had a little fun and Greg is such sweetheart so she has nothing to worry about. He will do anything to make her smile so she's in great hands. As for Travis he is a sore loser sometimes and gets pissed for no one reason. Hopefully ally and Travis fix their problems soon
    August 11th, 2011 at 10:24pm
  • StoleMyCookie

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    So...I really liked this chapter. I liked everything from Denae seeming like a bitch to Travis being a douche bag. I really hope you meant that your going to be posting more.

    I love you <3
    August 11th, 2011 at 07:37am
  • StoleMyCookie

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    I really really really really REALLY liked this chapter!! I liked the whole scene with Travis and Brian. And I'm proud of you, you did your research for this story :)
    July 14th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • teenagedream91

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    Als and Travis are good matchmakers, seems like Danae and Greg are really hitting it off. Also Travis looks like he is developing a different personality trait because of Ally here being very violent and protective. I like it, haha new and improved Travis
    July 13th, 2011 at 05:39pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Aw, you make the most simplest things freaking adorable! I just love the way he just sits in the tub with her and I think it would be a huge challenge to be in a tub with Travis no matter what size of the person. haha.Denae is right, he can't be stringing her along and act like that without any consequences. Can't wait for the next one girlie. :D On to the next story!
    July 7th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • TakeMeAsIAm

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    NASCAR!! i can't wait to see if Travis can really kick Ally's ass at the track.....i dont think so though ;)
    May 8th, 2011 at 03:02am
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    NASCAR! Am I right? haha they are just so cute together I could just die. Hmm, wonder how long they can keep this up. Travis and Ally can only keep this secret up for so long before they get tired of it or someone finds out about it. can't wait for the next one
    May 7th, 2011 at 08:20pm
  • carey21

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    kicking ass at the track? it means NASCAR!!
    May 7th, 2011 at 09:22am
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww that was so cute, just a quick little thing you need to fix is the couple of you's that you added instead of I's. Also the chapter title and title of the story is too light to see so instead of white go with grey or black, something like that. I feel so bad for Aaron though, he sounded like such a sweetheart and to get his heartbroken by Ally. It was for the best before anything got too serious I suppose and have him even more devastated. I wonder how long they are going to keep this up and so sorry for taking so long, I wasn't feeling the best yesterday to read them and I wanted to make sure I was feeling better so I can give you the feedback you actually need. :)
    April 21st, 2011 at 08:45pm
  • teenagedream91

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    Awww this was so cute how they got together! I couldn't help but gush and smile when they tried to hide from Jim. classic. :)
    February 25th, 2011 at 06:25am
  • TakeMeAsIAm

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    Yay!! They're together finally!! Well, kinda haha
    I think you're doing a pretty good job on this. I can't believe that there isn't more comments on this!
    February 24th, 2011 at 07:27am
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    Oh I wonder who it is!! I really like how you're portraying all the characters! Update soon!!!
    February 14th, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • londonnative

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    Loved the new chapter. Keep up the good work!
    February 1st, 2011 at 03:28pm
  • TakeMeAsIAm

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    I like this! and I love Travis! Very good story and update soon!
    December 30th, 2010 at 03:13am
  • londonnative

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    Really good story. Can't wait to find out what happens next!
    December 15th, 2010 at 05:44pm