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  • Apples'n'Bananas

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    Oh yeah you see that? I'm awesome!!!!!! Granted I knew this already. Anyways SEQUEL = YOU BETTER HAVE ONE OR I WILL COME AND GET YOU!! and the best part is that because I am sooooo cool this vote fore a sequel automatically counts as as many as you need/want to do a sequel. And chapter thirty better come soon!!! And she better choose Darren! Take her back Darren! William is lame!
    April 30th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Burgerat20

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    OMFG stupid mel !!!!
    god
    April 30th, 2011 at 12:18am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    So me being me... I re-read the whole story... Cause it's that good...
    And william fixed... Bahahahahahhaa.
    Your kiddin me right?
    He's raped her, he's hit her, he has also called her names... He said they were engaged when they weren't...
    Then, then, haha, there's Darren...
    He's been there with her through thick and thin...
    And she put his heart on the plate and ate it right in front of him...
    And now she's at his, William's, house she's gonna find out the hard way he didn't change one bit...
    April 29th, 2011 at 07:00pm
  • lollipop102

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    I think william and Mel should get 2 gether....Cuz she just screwed it with Darren...Maybe he gets mad and she tells him 2 take his meds....
    April 29th, 2011 at 05:49pm
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    I just satrted reading this today and I really like it! :D I hope there's a sequel.
    I think William and Darren are both cute but I don't think I'd wanna be with William after
    all he did. :P Soo, I guess I'm Team Darren. :D
    April 29th, 2011 at 04:40pm
  • MihaelaMitzy

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    great story:X
    April 29th, 2011 at 04:07pm
  • Bring On The Rain.

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    love it:)
    wonder who she will choose...?
    please update soon:)
    April 29th, 2011 at 03:55am
  • Parawhorree!x

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    No offense because ive been following your story for ages now, but its getting repetative. I always know what's going to happen: she's with Darren ...then goes running straight back to William the minute he calls. She needs to grow some balls of steel and pick a man and the right one too (team darren) and tell William where to shove his psycho ass because she can't have both as darren has already lectured about. Its selfish and unfair to the guys
    April 28th, 2011 at 03:48am
  • lollipop102

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    NOOO go 4 william!! She promised him!! :) ;)
    Anyway.....woah...
    April 27th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • rockstar101

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    This is REALLLYYYY goood.!(: William is kinda....freakyyyy but he is wayyy cuter.! Lol there should be another guy..like one trying to steal Mel away.! MUHAHAHAHAH
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:34pm
  • Kimm

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    William looks cuter but he's freaky. :| did they implant something into his brain or something
    April 27th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • ImmaEnforcer

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    TEAM DARREN! I'm in a fenzy for team Darren. Though the pic for team undecided was so damn cute.
    April 27th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • Burgerat20

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    wtf!! stupid mel.
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • Neon_Skies_Killjoy

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    TEAM DARREN
    nuff said...
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:11am
  • Apples'n'Bananas

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    :o she's gotta tell William!! Ahg! Oh and btw my name is kara therefore my comment counts as ten just because I am soooo awesome!!!! :D
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:11am
  • SweetPea

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    Team Darren!!!!:D
    I'm pissed at Melanie:( haha
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • number1techie

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    Team Darren. She needs to stop going back to William it's not healthy for either of them.
    April 27th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • Apples'n'Bananas

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    Okay so the team thing. Williams pic is HAWT! but I like darrens character soo much better so team Darren. :)
    April 26th, 2011 at 05:34am
  • lollipop102

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    Im sorry and all but team william
    April 24th, 2011 at 05:51pm
  • Ellydazedandconfused

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    Darren is getting jealous....
    William needs to die still
    April 23rd, 2011 at 11:47pm
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