When the Wicked Weep - Comments

I'm glad that she's not going to shut herself away and hide from this. And I can understand why she doesn't want to tell them the truth, but I'm interested to see what will happen now that Scratch knows that something's up.
I loved it, and I also agree with Scratch and Hell, the style of your writing is amazing :)

ARGH. I hate missing updates of yours. But I love getting to read them later. I have more updates to read and all. XP. I swear, My memory is fucked. lol.

I loved it. I mean, like Scratch said, the style of your writing is amazing. I love it. It's refreshing. It flows so easily, and honestly, I'm hooked on whatever you write. So you should update like now. Just saying. =]. I have to sporks ready..... XD

I love this story. Sincerely, it's probably your best so far just from reading these few short chapters. And I wish I could write like you; nothing's over-pushed. You use your metaphors but you leave lay, no need to explain them. I love that. With me...fuck, sometimes my shit's like reading "The Sound and the Fury" (great book, but SO fucking hard to read).

(sorry I've taken so long to catch up with this, and missed chapter 2)

I liked how her main reaction to having cancer was to think about the other girls and how they'd react and deal with the news. It shows that they have such a good friendship and that she does care despite her somewhat care free demeanour.

I'm really interested to see where you take this.

I can't givea full comment, yet, but I am going to as soon as I finish reading what you have up at the moment. I shall give a nice long comment when I'm in school, haha, cause I have more time there.

I really love this so far. So, uh "nice story, nice update" :P

But seriously, I have subscribed and am looking forward to the next chapter because it has a familiar yet different vibe than your other stories. I'm interesting in where the 'supernatural' turn is going so I'm really looking forward for that.

XD you always describe me as the smart one; it makes me smile.

Yeah, just in general looking forward to this story :)

"You've done what I wanted you to do and not up to a satisfactory quota so, get the fuck out of my house."

I think I'm dying with laughter. The look on his face had to have been priceless. Favorite line, ever. XP. I really loved the update, however, I'm slightly concerned about the main character. Okay, not slightly. VERY concerned.

Always impressed. :)
How's that for two words?

I missed your crazy ass.
I can't help but wonder what you were like as a child after reading your writing and descriptions of yourself. lol
Looking forward to your return!

Firstly, I want to say that I'm disappointed in myself for not having read any of your stories before, because if this chapter is anything to go by I think I would have really enjoyed them (I shall have to stop by read them when I have the time)

Anyway, I really like your style of writing, it being different from most things I read and write myself. I have been drawn in, I am subscribed, and I look forward to you posting the next chapter.

Nice story. Nice update.

Sorry, but you walked right into that one. XP

Here's my real comment(s).

I don't think that nice story, quite covers it. The story is amazing thus far. It just has so many hard truths in it, if you will. I love how you pointed out how people try and hide their nature. People do try and bury the darker side of themselves.

I would also like to point out how you put quotes in the story and relate it to every day life, if you will. Every day life for them, at least.

I would also like to say, SEE? Questions do get people's ass kicked. XP

^ that's the main reason why I wanted to leave a comment. lol.

Long story short, I really enjoyed the humor, the blood, the violence, the descriptions. No one can do it quite as well as you, my dear Satan. XP