I really liked this, it kind of gave her more personality!
August 14th, 2012 at 10:19am
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I like it that she finally want to live her life. Amazing chapter <3August 13th, 2012 at 10:30pm
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This is probably one of the best I've ever read. Please keep updating! :)August 13th, 2012 at 10:15pm
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i love this story :DAugust 13th, 2012 at 04:51pm
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I fell in love with this story ❤August 13th, 2012 at 06:12am
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And now you have another subscriber and a comment
Update good stuff
Good story reminds me of that movie my sisters keeperAugust 8th, 2012 at 08:54am -
Please, please update soon :) thanks!July 12th, 2012 at 06:14am
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Love itJuly 11th, 2012 at 05:53pm
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Really great story. I'm subscribed for sureeeee. I love how you put detail in it and actually make it seem real and you don't rush it, unlike a lot of stories on here :D I hope you update soon!October 5th, 2011 at 09:18pm
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I think it's a good thing they didn't kiss. They should get to know each other a little better, become friends, before that happens. Love the chapter, update soon please <3October 4th, 2011 at 06:56pm
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Love it <3August 6th, 2011 at 10:41pm
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I really like this story. You are amazing with words. I really like the fact that i can picture everything that is happening because you describe it so well. All the emotion that you put into this story is perfection. I feel like I can feel everything that each person is feeling. I really hope that you continue writing this story since I would definitely love to continue reading it!!!!August 6th, 2011 at 08:55pm
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can you PULEASE update this PLEASE!!!!!! i wanna know what happens sooo bad. and i wanna know what her sickness is! AHHH! please please please please!May 11th, 2011 at 11:05pm
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This story is fantastic. You need to update, like.. every second of every day. Subscribed. :)April 24th, 2011 at 07:10pm
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Love it <3April 24th, 2011 at 06:56pm
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That is so sadApril 17th, 2011 at 10:02pm
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Hmm why exactly is she dying?April 17th, 2011 at 07:00pm
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Alex is cute when he's jealous :P He so likes her, it's pretty obvious. <3April 10th, 2011 at 08:09pm
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Hey, I really dig this story. Keep it up.April 10th, 2011 at 06:38pm
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Oh mah goodness.
I absolutely love this story.
As a writer who also is writing a girl dying story (check it out: In sickness and in love) youve taken such an amazing approach. The whole shun everyone mindset is refreshing.
I lovvvvve Declan. I love how strong she is and how she tries to keep her mother happy.
I feel that she misses that female companionship. What does she have? Gah! I want to know.
Alex is such a sweets but a bit aggravating.
Jack <3 is super cute with his whole "friends?"
Declan and Alex forever tho. Let her enjoy her last days.
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GREAT STORY.
Its positively amazing. I want to see if she pushes them away or if for once she'll try to make herself happy.
Love it! Update soon!April 10th, 2011 at 05:31pm
