White Roses for Mary - Comments

[font=2] Dude, you made me fall in love <3
I'm so scared for them againest Ben

I think this is cute, then again I'm a sucker for ghost/human stories.

I think this a very worthy ghost adventures fanfic :)

This is an uber cute story. I don't know who Zak Bagans is [D:] but I liked this, she being a ghost, it's so much better than a cliché fan-fiction.
My only complaint is the layout, which isn't bad, jut the default font bugs me D: But that's me complaining.
Great job dear <3

Since I promised I'd read the first chapter, I did. <3

I don't know who Zak Bagans is but I really didn't need too. Your description is wonderful and I love the plot of this. I really love that she's a ghost, it brings originality to the story. Your details are amazing and your writing is great. I can't wait to see where this goes!

I love you for this. Seriously, a Zak Bagans Fan-Fiction ah, I love it. I love that she's a ghost and it's a lock down. I love that it's so detailed and she makes him seem like hes in such danger when it's really her. Ah, I love it.

Just one tiny thing. The layout hurt my eyes :( The white on black just hurt. You could change your main background to black and your story area to white with black or gray font colors and it would be a little more easier on the eyes. :)

<3
This is so cute.
I feel so bad for her, </3
When I watch Ghost Adventures I sometimes feel like this while watching it.
Like they're all just watching them roam around their home.