EW GROSS OLD PEOPLE SEX. poor Denny :( Lucille's cheating on him with his best friend. what kind of a friend would do that? especially when it's a grown man! really!! oohh.. the party is at the hotel? and since it's a hotel... will Johnny and Avery be spending the night together? alone? in a hotel room? winky face, winky face, winky face ;) you are an amazing writer, that is for darn sure :]
Ahahah Ricky Bobby, you've done it again. Love, love, LOVE this chapter. But I think I say that about every one.My bad. I really do not like Lucille. She's quite the "cheating bitch." But I truly love Johnny with a passion. :P Keep it up! <3
Ndhuehfbfjebbh Vic dbdhiejsbhrjd Lucy dbsjnbduendhdjgoingtokillthemboth. *sigh* I can't even comment on the rest of the chapter properly. But I love Johnny and his vindictiveness and how he's going to force them to come clean, and I love and feel so bad for Avery and her whole family.
Just started reading this...and I read every chapter extremely quickly. Haha. Keep going, it really has turned into an excellent story and I'm kind of addicted now, so no backing out! ;)
I want a Johnny. It's not even fair that he's a character in a story. I want one! I like Avery's reasoning, too. I don't know if I'd be able to think like that if I discovered that one of my parents was either cheating, or being cheated on. I'd probably react like Johnny did and go apeshit and try to bust them. The treehouse thing was so cute! For some reason, Vic reminds me of the dad from twilight, only not.. weird? I don't know how to describe it. But I kind of like him so far. Ew, gross, hickeys on Dads. I would throw up if I saw a hickey on my Dad's neck >< Anyhow, please don't make us wait so long for the next update! I love this story so much!