Fuck Club - Comments

I bow down to you.

From beginning to end this story was a piece of art. It shines a flickering light onto some teenagers that are just trying to figure out how to live the lives they lead. And in the moments between the flickers we see this character that started off as a relatively clean slate, a canvas just waiting to be splashed with different colors, and that character was Star. And you used the dirtiest colors, and highlighted the events in the other character's own mishaps.

This story is so unforgiving. The characters so damaged. But it's beautiful in some dark twisted way.

There was nothing I would want changed. And I don't even want to know where these characters end up later in life. It's something to read, to take in, to see, and then you just move on. But this story leaves something behind, a broken pixel in a corner of a video.

I find this so incredible. Thank you for writing this.

Your characters and plot lines are so incredibly unique and memorable. Everything you write is something I've never ever seen before and it always blows me away. Honest to god you're probably my favorite author on here

That was one of the best things I've ever read.

I swear to god your writing is the best damn thing to happen to this website. Everything you write is actually perfect. Don't ever stop.

Why is this finished? This is, omg. Crying, aklahskjglkfjg my emotions, jesus christ. This is all sorts of crazy and beautiful and just so wonderfully simple.

good god, this was all kinds of perfect and lovely and incendiary (in the almost famous kind of way) and just, wow. i don't know how you did it, but you managed to send chills down my spine with ten chapters and most people can't even do that with fifty.

I love this story so much! I actually read it the first time you wrote it and I thought it was amazing then. The writing style is wonderful and the characters are so different and interesting. Everything about it is brilliant and you write so well. Everything you write is just pure heaven!

Oh my god that was so good.

The tears won't stop. ever. omg.

I CANT BELIEVE ITS DONE :')) (i like chinese too btw) but man i dont know what to say but wow how many times can i say perfect before it loses its meaning bc this was perfect the first one was perfect and then you revamped it and brought iT TO L IFE again ahhh ^_^ (my comments never make sense but you get the gist hopefully

I really liked this story. i loved the style of writing.

I cant see the words well at all so i'm not going to give myself a headache trying to read it. You should use a darker font

wait. what? the end? WHAT!

I love, love, love this.

Its good. Really good but confusing. You should alsomake the words a darker color

correction: officially is great and makes me want to cry because i did not come up with it

this officially is perfect and it's such a creative idea and fuck i like this a lot

"Wiping the seat with a wet wipe (or a “moist towelette” as she calls them)" that just sums skinny up in my mind eeeurgh

i swear to god i commented on the first chapter i wrote like 5 paragraphs on how perfect you were omg did i not post it how omg im so dumb

BUT LULA

i just i love everything about this and star and the characters and GOD the names why must you be so perfect and lovely and wonderful why
i love the "we won't be coming home" bit and idk why but its so good there and love you and what else can i say to praise you without sounding like a moron

this is perfect it's perfect it's perfect
have i told you it's perfect yet
it's perfect aaaaaaaaaah~ xo