Fuck Club - Comments

ohhhhhhhhh :-( I thought it was perfect as it was but I trust you! I'm excited to see where you go with this though xxxxxxxxx

I cannot believe I haven't commented on this before!!!!!! I love it almost as much as I love Yuri Pleskun and it's my twenty millionth time re-reading

confusing and I don't quite understand either but I don't care because that last line is giving me chills and my god I love you.

i don't think i really understand what happened. but that's why i like this.
why you're a great writer.

Oh Jesus christ. Star is more messed up than I thought.
this is great great great.

I hate Ruby.

i dig on this oh man real good reallly really good

so. star killed herself over ruby.

hmph. i have to digest this.

Wow you are incredibly talented. And you're 13. That's fucking crazy. This story is so good that it's almost driving me mad. The way you word things and the plot itself. Stuff like that actually happens. Can't wait to read the next chapter

about time someone else has found your stuff.

this is getting good. fascinating. i really want them to continue..

There's something utterly fascinating about this story, and something utterly perfect about your writing style. Honestly, I'm hooked. With very few words, you've got a whole slew of emotions running for these characters - and even with vague descriptions about who they are. :) This is great.

Ruby and Skinny. Skinny and Ruby.

They broke Star’s heart. She couldn’t stand the sight of them together. Still, she smiled though and bit her lip. She told us it was whatever. And then she would smile and say again, “Whatever.”

We know, right?

I love your writing, that part and how you word it--it's perfect. This story is perfect, I love how Star's going wayward, I feel pity for Skinny, and Ruby scares me.

love love love

I enjoy this story very much, though it's a little confusing :)
You do repeat yourself but I think you do that on purpose.
I can't wait for more :)

What the hell is going on, I don't exactly know. But I like it and subscribed. :3

so here's my pathetic attempt at trying to give constructive criticism:

this is lovely, truly lovely. I really do like it, the layout's really quite simple but it suits it perfectly. The start got me hooked, I like how innocent Star is, and how these 'total losers' describe themselves. oh, and Ruby of course. odd name for a boy, but I like it.

This is pure talent, doo da.

I dunno, but this story has hooked me. :)
The way you describe things and people . . . it's magical, dude.
You've gotten some talent, definitely.

so i really like ruby.
and skinny. i like how i see this playing in my head like an indie movie.

pre-tty cool.

ohhhh lala

this sounds so good. i'm excited.

i want to know who was killed !!! it was star, right ?