I feel honored that you thanked me in this chapter Kiddo. It was beautifully written. Very impressed. Words cannot express how very proud I am of you my friend.
D'AWWZ! The ending had a tear falling down my face. *applause* BEAUTIFUL MY DEAR SO BEAUTIFUL! You could feel the tension between Billy and Justice as their love stories grows deeper and deeper creating drama. I LOVE IT!
Umm...WOWZ! William was making my skin crawl throughout this entire chapter. Compulsion on Killa -_- This boy is asking for a smackdown. Beautiful Sis LOVED IT!
Very nicely done. I could feel every bit of emotion just dripping off the text. it's like a rollercoaster ride with the ups and downs with the emotions and whatnot. i loved it!! can't wait to read 4! :D