The ED Diaries - Comments

I just finished the rest and I have to say, you had me in tears with every story. Going through this right now I could relate with them all. You did so well in writing this, its not dramatized and over done like some stories. You did well. Great job

Ive only read the first one so far but I love your writing. You make is so believable and real. Im totally going to sit here and finish the rest. Odds are ill comment again :)
good job!

Ive only read the first one so far but I love your writing. You make is so believable and real. Im totally going to sit here and finish the rest. Odds are ill comment again :)
good job!

chapter 3, Renee:
very lovely banner, she is pretty :)
the scary thing is this:
their minds are doing this to them,
so they're honestly killing themselves, which is really sad :(
But i like the idea of all of these people getting help at one general location
wait, so some guy, I got confused in the paragraph talking about the man
why would she just puke up the laxatives and stuff?
she must be extra, extra skinny then :/
and her mother found her, of course Renee is going to be mad,
but she's gotta get help, and I'm glad she got there
I really liked this chapter, wonderful job!

this looks so interesting and i don't have time to read it right now, but i'm definitely about to go hit that subscribe button. :)

I just realized that ED means "eating disorder"

very interesting. and sad.
good writing.

I've heard about this numerous times, and I wanted to read it,
at least some of it, because people are saying how good it is
first off, I love the layout, it's really pretty, I like the light colors throughout
I also like how each character gets their own banner
the summary is good, it's really breif, but it gets you intrested
and that's when you really figure out what "ED" stands for
Oh Wolf is addicted to diet pills, yeah not good
It's like she has two people living in her mind. Her, and this thing
this thing that is basically killing her, and it's apart of her mind
It's a scary thought to think about that this really does happen
Ahh, this all came from her mother's doing.
I couldn't imagine my mother being like that, and she is my example
this was quite heart wretching honestly, I feel so bad for her
and her parents took her to the hospital, maybe she can get better.
I love this so far all of you, it's wonderful :)

WOW. I just read the first chapter and i am amazed by how well it was written. It was frighteningly dark, and i could really feel what she felt...which made it all the more frightening. The grammar and spelling was also great. Great job so far! I am definitely going to continue reading! =)

I'm sorry, this story needs way more attention that it's getting, where is those 20 pages of comments? You're all fantastic authors and eerything is so realistic, because of 'course, as silk tea. said, they all want the perfect body for dancing and modelling. Every single word in this story is absolutely amazing, it grabs the reader, and the layout and banner is beautiful.
I think this is a more detailed comment from my last one :)
Anyway, keep it up guys because this, this is one of my favourite stories on Mibba.

Jordan, you're fantastic. I love how you took dancing and an eating disorder together because that is so one of the big reasons most girls have an eating disorder to get that perfect body just so they can keep their position as the best dancer. It's so true and you're fantastic.

I like that all these people have different stuff wrong with them. Makes for an interesting read.

I'm subscribing, definently. This idea is wonderful; and I love how every new chapter as a banner with that new character on it. The chapters are all written beautifully, you are all amazing writers. Keep up with the good work!

YAY, I'm going to be stalking this story from now on if you all don't mind. (:
I think my favorite character as of right now is Fiona. She's got spunk.
I'm excited to see where you guys are going to take each of your characters.
... hopefully to a better place. I feel sorry for them. xD

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I absolutely adore this. (:

Pretty good.

Can I just say all of you are extremely skilled readers. I've read stories like this on other sites, but sadly, the majority of them were all rather badly written, so it's refreshing to read something of quality. :)
But honestly, the emotion and feeling you get from this is just... breathtaking. I can't wait for updates. :)

All I can say is repeating all of the above. Wow, just wow. This is amazing...!

Very nice. Very, very nice. Please keep writing. :] And can I just point out that the layer and banner are also gorgeous. Mhmm. Lovely.

This is incredible! All of you are so talented. (: I look forward to more; I'm subbing. :D
I remember seeing/reading this on Mibba before, but I'm really glad that it's back! The layout is gorgeous, and of course the story is wonderful. Everything's so descriptive, and realistic. You can literally picture everyone's lives with their disorders.
Great job.
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