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  • Hummingbird;

    Hummingbird; (100)

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    Guess what I'm doing? Sub-scrib-ing! :DD Update, pretty please with Floo Powder on top! :DD
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • three-imaginaryboys

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    I really like your story.
    The twins are so cute =]
    One suggestion, after somebody says a piece of dialogue, skip a line.
    It's makes it easier on the reader.
    Other than that, I love it!
    December 25th, 2010 at 08:18pm
  • butterfly.kisses.

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    Good work so far! Continue with it :)
    December 22nd, 2010 at 05:49am
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