I seriously think Will is such a douche, and I'm hoping that Lenny will see that soon. He just uses people for his own damn pleasure. Gah. Loved this by the way. I love anytime that Flenny rolls around tongue wrestling.
So I realized this in the last update but I didn't say anything cause I haven't seen anyone else comment anything about it and I don't really want to spoil it if I'm right... but the girl he 'loves' is Ivy and then there's Alieen Iverson hmm they have something in common with their names... just sayin. but I might be wrong. :]
God, you're brilliant. Seriously, you're killing me with these updates because I'm reading them thinking "PLEASE JUST CONFESS YOUR LOVE TO HER, FLETCH". I'm all squirming her. HAHF:SLDFKHJ. I loved it. Thank you for writing.
Wake up and realize that though Fletch may have been a douche before, he is now a sweet, caring guy. And you should go out with him, because if you don't, I will.
Loved the last chapter, poor Fletch just wanted to tell her how he felt and she just assumed he was shutting her up haha but that's what he gets for being a jerks sometimes. Update asap please!!!!!!!!
SO I THINK I'VE DECIDED. As of this chapter, I'm totally on Fletch's side. I mean, here he is, trying so damn hard to confess that he sort of likes her, and here she is babbling on about all this non-important crap. Poor Fletch-y boy. And Will, I'm sorry to say, you have lost the competition for now. Fletch's cuteness has prevailed. Will my opinion change next chapter? Most likely. :D
I think it's cool how you don't necessarily go for the whole "both people are perfect, there's just some random slut that gets in the way of their love" thing. It's so overplayed. But for instance, Lenny jumps to conclusions way too fast. Like the above comment, she needs to learn to shut up every once in a while. But that's just what makes her her. I cannot stress how much I love the characters because they aren't some damn perfect little things. They've got their flaws too. And the relationship with her brother makes me laugh. HERE'S TO HOPING THAT GOOD THINGS COME IN THE NEXT CHAPTER. :D
Aha, to be honest, at first I thought I'd only half-enjoy this read, maybe because I felt like the drama would be pulling the plot along, and the characters wouldn't. And my favourite part to any story has to be the characters, no doubt, they're what always strike me the hardest. BUT LET ME TELL YOU, I WAS PLEASENTLY SURPRISED AS I KEPT READING!
I really do love this story a whole lot, seriously. Mostly because I like how usually, for instance, everything would be Natalie's fault, or someone else's, but it's sort of like they know that what they're doing is wrong. Hooking up with Fletch for Aileen, Fletch being a complete ass and Will trying to hook up with anything that has two legs. :D
I actually read this entire thing in two sittings- which is weird with me because I always get distracted, but this one the entire time I'm sitting here like "HOLY CRAP WHAT SHALL COME NEXT?"because I always think I know, and then you throw that curve ball and I'm stuck at the beginning like a little kid in a candy story.
And I can't decide who I'd like her to be with either, aha. At first I was totally for Will, but then I was thinking that naturally if they made out some sort of connection would blossom. And then Will turned into mega bitch, and I was totally on Fletch's side because he was totally being sweet too. Except I swear that Ivy is Aileen because Ivy... Iverson. I don't know, JUST A GUESS!
Anyways, and then Will came back to being so goshdarn nice, and I'm like... crap. Because now I'm so torn between the two I just can't even. I hope either Will smartens up and stops being so darn oblivious or Fletch admits there's no Ivy, or SOMETHING TO HELP ME DECIDE. For now, I'm just as confused as she is
If you couldn't tell by now, you've definitely got yourself another subscriber and I really adore your story, it's seriously awesome. :D