The Three Armies - Comments

oh god i was gonna be cool

oh god im reading this in school (hey a rhyme)

AHHHHH WHYYYY

MIKEEYYYYY

that video makes me so depressed. oigh. well. beautifully written anyways

"I just killed Mikey Way."

Yes you did. How dare you.

Aw man I really didn't want it to end like that even though I knew it would (why can't there be a happen ending to everything?), but it was chest/heart/gut-clenchingly beautiful.

Meh. Now I must go cry 'cause Mikewayisdead :(

x

I think I'm going to cry too ):
I love how protective Gee is, even if he's a bit over protective. This was lovely, one of the best one shots ever.
You write brilliantly.

Lovely layout and summary.
Just thought it was wonderful.
Amazing start to the story, I love your writing style, right off the start I see how it all seems to flow together. Just lovely.
The way you write is just beautiful you paint pictures in peoples minds, at times they were terrifying and horrifying pictures but you still managed to paint the pictures clearly. I'm not very familiar with MCR but I think I followed this along as well as I possibly could. You have a wonderful writing style and I'm sorry I couldn't have judged this sooner. It was greatly written and I really enjoyed reading it :)

Just to be random, when I read this, I imagined Ray in a nurses' dress. >.< But I loved this so much, I'm re-reading it again. (:

I've always wanted to see a story written off the ghost of you.
This was so great.
Now I'm gonna cry.

This was absolutely gorgeous.
And unbearably sad.
This is fantastic.

Oh Holy balls that was amazing.
You are such a brilliant writer....
I love the way you wrote the ending, the way you described the war.
It was lovely writing, even though Mikey died :(

Eep. That was amazing. Except for the Mikey dying part. Well, even that was great. C: You're an amazing writer, darling. Is Mikey your favorite from MCR? Mine's Frank. :D

Leisha darling... I'm tearing up here Holy Fizzing Whizbees.....

I loved it. I loved it so so much I can't even say it that many times.

But I think my favorite part, and I think the strongest part, was when he was running. I dunno, it just... really clicked. It was wonderful.

But the ending was beautiful... and SO SAD D:

Oh, and you might need so word-fixing. Just read this bit by itself:
"he can block out the sound of his older brother losing his shit right next to him."
It sounds like Gee's going to the bathroom

But but but....
OMFG AHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love you

Aaaaaaw!!
'I just killed Mikey way.
I think im gonna go cry'
That is cute, but I cried!
Loved the story - even gave me a few good ideas! :D