Monster - Comments

Wooh, I want to know what the problem is. And I feel so sorry for Eve.
Keep up the amazing work!! Update soon!! :D

Oh my god. Sorry I haven't been commenting. i never got the cnance. So now I am!!! =) This story is amazing! Can't wait for the next one.

keep up the great work!!!!!^.^

dunDUNDUNDUN.....dundun!

poor girl!!!!! keep it up!!!

update update update!!! :D

this is a really good story i really liked it,it reminded me of a movie i saw before idk the name but it was like your story the guy was a vampire also i think and he had slave girls also. but you should def keep going with the story :)

Ooh. Gruesome. I like how she had to repeat the rules ten times.
Update soon. (;

usually I hate vampire fictions (ex. Twilight)
but this one was really amazing and not cliche at all
its great ::D

I'm glad that was realistic, and not like those horrible plot lines. You really are a good writer <3

I love your story, it's awesome. Also the picture you have for the background is great!

Absolutely love this:) update please.?:))

Woo I'm glad you got more commenters. Also, I like this chapter. It gives back details. I'm anxiously awaiting the next one. I literally checked my email all day to see if you had updated xD

Wow, he's a vampire! That's pretty cool, and I love the main character, she's really strong, I'd be terrified all the time if I was her.
Update soon. (: This is an amazing story.

love it!!!

love it!!!

Omg i love this!!!

awesome story keep on writing!!!!!!

:D I love love love it! I'm excited most of all for her punishment and I truly hope he goes through with it! And...That made me seem crazy but oh well! And why aren't more people commenting on this amazing story? >.< But anyway! I can't wait for the next update!

UPDATE. This has got to be my favourite story ever, (better than the twilight saga)!
Jen
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