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  • newyork_xo

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    Woo! Loved this one too. I look forward to reading the sequel. :)
    January 14th, 2012 at 08:00pm
  • drown the noise.

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    I really like this one! It's amazing! Hell, all your stories I've read so far are amazing! :)
    *goes to read another one now*
    December 6th, 2011 at 10:58am
  • alustreya

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    Side comment: I totally agree with the whole, building up the relationship/events and drama rather than focusing on the dating relationship itself.

    Real comment:
    ....it's almost 1AM and I have to wake up in approximately five hours. Am I excited? No. But did I freakin' love this story and therefore it makes up for it? Yes. I really like how the story is based on an issue, and especially how it ended with getting their friendship somehow on track rather than jumping on them being instantly mushy together right at that moment in the bathroom.

    Asskarth, you are a real ass in this. But, I love the actual bickering and how controlling he is. Rian though, much love to him.
    October 10th, 2011 at 09:51am
  • alustreya

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    OKAY, I'm reading chapter three and I am so angry that I just have to leave this comment.
    ARGGGHHH ALEX! I can't- I can't even begin omg he's truly Asskarth. This is about the ass-y-ist alex I've ever read. Ugh, my heart goes out to Lyle<3
    October 10th, 2011 at 08:32am
  • passion4music17

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    I know this has all ready been completed but I feel the need to tell you how adorable I think it is.

    I also cannot wait for the sequel. [:
    August 9th, 2011 at 06:51pm
  • prettyxinxyourxpain

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    Aw.... I'm glad that they at least made up. They're good now. That was a wonderful story, seriously.

    When you post the sequel, please announce it or something. I'd hate to miss out on it.

    Fabulous job.
    July 3rd, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • Kaybeanna

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    I love and loved this story, but you already knew that.I think you ended it perfectly. And please dont feel rushed into making a sequel. No matter when it comes out it will be awesome. I also dont think Alex and Lyle could do lovey dovey as much as I would want that to happen. But perfect story once again. Oh and love you too :P
    July 2nd, 2011 at 01:07pm
  • elisegeree

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    I am so glad everything worked out! I can't wait for the sequel :)
    I know exactly how you feel about once they start dating it gets boring, because that's true. From a writer's perspective, at least.
    July 2nd, 2011 at 03:23am
  • Kelseylynnf

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    Awww this was a really good ending!
    I'm happy that they are finally friends again, and I'm glad that Alex finally admitted his feelings to her. Good for him!
    I can't wait for the sequel!! :)
    July 1st, 2011 at 10:07pm
  • bisbisqwert

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    Ahhhh, the end. What can I say? YOU SUCK.

    Nah, you know I'm kidding, but I was crossing my fingers for them to FINALLY get together. Whatever. I'll lie in wait for the sequel, and for more chances to harrass you about your amazing stories. Don't make me wait TOO long, though, because I've become emotionally invested in this.(;

    Oh, and by the way, when Alex admits to himself that he wants to bone Lyle, I almost fell out of my chair laughing.
    July 1st, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • WarDrums

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    Great ending =P liked that you didnt make them date and fall in love...that would have been to weird and not-believeable...your ending was so much better! especially the kesha argument...loved it =)

    yay sequel! I shall keeps my eyes peeled!
    July 1st, 2011 at 06:15pm
  • MYP

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    I really loved your ending, because I think it was perfect for them. I don't think it would have made sense to have them together right away. But I can't wait for the sequel!! Or any of your other stories haha. They are too good!!!!
    This story was so good, and I'm sad that it's over! But I loved everything about it! Can't wait to read the other stories you have coming up!!
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • Tayyyyyy

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    I like how everything just fell into place, even if they didn't start dating in this one, it worked well that way.
    But nowww I am itching for it so I look forward to the sequel, whenever you start to post it.
    I can't believe it's already overr, but it's been fabulous!
    And I can't wait, :D.
    <3
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:27pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love the chapter. I'm glad they're friends again <3
    July 1st, 2011 at 05:10pm
  • Kaybeanna

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    Ahhhwdjbqwjendwqmsokqwposkpowqmxddas the "I miss you" text just made me awwww so hard. I cant believe only one one chapter left but at least we get a sequel. I just want them to be in love and Alex to be good and everything to be good. Oh I finally caught up and I cant believe I missed the amazing chapters.
    June 30th, 2011 at 07:52am
  • The-Ugly-Duckling

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    NO WAY THERES ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT
    June 30th, 2011 at 01:11am
  • bisbisqwert

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    I'm clapping like a retarded seal. AHHHHH! I'm sooo hoping they become freinds. And maybe more? [insert suggestive eyebrow raise here]

    Anywhooo, way to update! You're getting quicker. I would leave a longer comment, but I'm currently grounded and sneaking on the computer just to read this, so have pride in your writing.;)

    UPDATE SOON<3
    June 29th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • MYP

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    LOVED THE UPDATE! It was crazy good, and adorable. Especially the end with them texting, I loved it! I love both Alex and Lyle, and I cannot wait for this last chapter!!! I know it's going to be good.
    Update again soon please!!
    June 29th, 2011 at 05:45am
  • elisegeree

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    I didn't like it, I LOVED it!
    I am so glad that Alex is putting in so much effort.
    It's cute that he kind of doesn't know what he's doing.
    I'm sad there's only one more chapter though!
    June 29th, 2011 at 12:23am
  • letthewallsbreakdown

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    Awwww. I love it! They're finally making some progress :D I can't wait for the next update.
    June 28th, 2011 at 09:48pm