We're Concentrating on Falling Apart. - Comments

This was beautiful. <3

:'D keep writing flapjack teehee X100
amazing as always

Aww :/

Aww, that's so sad. I noticed three mistake. One where you've accidentally done two full stops both spaced from each other. Another with dialogue, where you've put He said "Thanks, Sky." and... Well, I think it should be He said, "Thanks, Sky," and... You know? And where you always put defiantly, instead of definitely. But this was brilliant, I could feel the emotion and it was so realistic, not sure what to make of the characters yet but I can't wait for more.

I can't wait for this :D