This Is the One Thing I'm Not Sure Of - Comments

  • Ultraviolet Light

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    i love this story!
    *subscribes*
    I love the fact that sid is a man whore in this and its not like all the other stories where hes perfect and never sleeps with anyone or dates and all that stuff!
    more soon please!! xD
    January 18th, 2011 at 09:54pm
  • evgeni

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    I'm really excited to see where you decide to take this story. Your writing is superb. You have the right amount of details and dialogue to make it comprehensible and interesting.
    And can I tell you that I like that the lead female character isn't a hockey player (nothing against them at all!) in this story. Beside the fact that she's Flower's sister, it was interesting reading how Katie and Sidney came together and how their relationship (or lack thereof) has developed so far.
    Speaking of Katie...I love her character a lot. :) And I really like this Sidney too for some odd reason. Maybe its the fact that he comes off as an asshole which makes the interactions between Katie and Sidney that much more exciting. :D

    Well, I'll stop typing this obnoxiously long comment now...Can't wait for your next update!!!
    January 14th, 2011 at 01:44am
  • SoccergirlBianca

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    woah this is a great story
    January 13th, 2011 at 11:19pm
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    Things I said while reading these chapters:

    Wow, he must've really wanted that sex

    Ya-!? I don't yap!

    More names? Really, Katie? It's rude to call people names.

    Oh, don't be such a baby.

    He's rather violent, innit he?

    Oh, oh, that's awkward and inappropriate.

    That's just inappropriate! It doesn't help that his ugly picture is staring at me!

    Um, no, that ain't happening.

    No, no. There's none [pent up sexual tension] of that going on.

    Why do you make me the whore?!?!?!?!

    No. Nicole wouldn't! Nicole is a saint! She is not perverted in that way!!

    You should watch me read stories! It's hilarious! I was practically hyperventilating while reading during tutorial today.
    January 12th, 2011 at 02:20am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    I have the greatest comment for you!!! Are you ready????
    January 12th, 2011 at 02:17am
  • DarkMystique

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    Yay, you updated again. :'D *gives cookies*
    Haha, this chapter was funny! I love the constant 'love-hate-relationship' arguments and bickering Katie and Sydney have. hilariously cute! ^_^
    Amazing/brilliant chapter!
    January 11th, 2011 at 12:02pm
  • AllTimePensFan

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    I'm so glad that the team loves her and yay for Jordan for being there for her. Now the whole thing with Sidney....that's a very interesting situation. Can't wait for more, to see where this is all going to go. Keep it up =)
    January 11th, 2011 at 05:35am
  • DarkMystique

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    Poor Katie! Oh, my days, how horrible! How could Sydney lose her friggin' virginity?! *Strangles him.* Still, I think that they're getting along better than before, now that I'm completely up to date with reading your story.
    Aw, poor Simba! Locked in a closet thingy! D:
    January 10th, 2011 at 05:11am
  • AllTimePensFan

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    just found this and I love it. I love the hate relationship between Sid and Katie...but hate him for stealing her virginity. Glad he was there to save her though. Keep it up, I can't wait for more
    January 10th, 2011 at 02:49am
  • AlissaRose89

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    another great update!!!
    January 10th, 2011 at 02:46am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    Torture is so much fun though! ;)
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:48pm
  • DarkMystique

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    Wow, I've only read the first chapter and I'm already liking your story! I think that you've made a terrific effort and are a good writer. I liked hat fact that you actually add details and descriptions, which is always a huge help in stories. So well done so far!
    January 9th, 2011 at 07:45am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    You're a freak! (You spelled Maya wrong.) I'M GONNA FIND A PANDA AND HAVE HIM BITCH SLAP YOU!
    January 9th, 2011 at 06:58am
  • AlissaRose89

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    love this story!!! can't wait for more!!
    January 9th, 2011 at 12:04am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    I really like that Nicole. She's got spunk!!!
    January 7th, 2011 at 07:00am
  • tracyrobinson8729

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    I love this story, can't wait till what happens next!
    January 4th, 2011 at 12:45am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    Your cats a freak. I wouldn't do anything it says. Can school just not happen? Oh, I forgot to tell you. I changed my mind about next year. I'm gonna be a bronco.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 06:11am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    You're a perv.
    December 31st, 2010 at 04:24am
  • Mrs. Ninja Jones

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    I'd update if anyone actually read the DAMN THING!!! Besides, you've already read past the next chapter. LEARN TO SPELL TONGUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You would fail an elementary spelling bee based on that word alone!
    December 30th, 2010 at 10:25pm
  • brilliantblonde9

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    I never thought I would say that Sidney Crosby needs a kick in the pants, but in this story, he really, really does. But I like it. :)
    December 30th, 2010 at 04:06pm