January 18th, 2011 at 09:54pm
I'm really excited to see where you decide to take this story. Your writing is superb. You have the right amount of details and dialogue to make it comprehensible and interesting.
And can I tell you that I like that the lead female character isn't a hockey player (nothing against them at all!) in this story. Beside the fact that she's Flower's sister, it was interesting reading how Katie and Sidney came together and how their relationship (or lack thereof) has developed so far.
Speaking of Katie...I love her character a lot. :) And I really like this Sidney too for some odd reason. Maybe its the fact that he comes off as an asshole which makes the interactions between Katie and Sidney that much more exciting. :D
Well, I'll stop typing this obnoxiously long comment now...Can't wait for your next update!!!
*subscribes*
I love the fact that sid is a man whore in this and its not like all the other stories where hes perfect and never sleeps with anyone or dates and all that stuff!
more soon please!! xD