This Is the One Thing I'm Not Sure Of - Comments

One, I don't melt. I'm not a witch, despite contrary argument. Two, when you said Mario, I read it in an Italian accent and immediately thought of crappy mustache and red hat. Three, for some reason, in my mind Jordan is black. I don't know why, but I have said it, therefore it is so!

Maybe I don't want to comment!!!! How bout that? So, you know what? I'm not gonna!!!!

Not signed,

Nicole (your bestest friend in the whole wide world)

Does this remind you of anything?

Great start, I cant wait to read more!

Oh, please, you couldn't write an NC-17 story if you tried. I'm seriously afraid of the present. I am convinced there's going to be a dead person in that box. Come back to Michigan!!! I want to save him before he's completely dead!!!!!! Its 10:10, 11:11's loser sister (think Vikks). It's almost Christmas Eve!!!!! Bubba and I are lying in "bed" right now.

love it, update soon please

I love it. I like that you have sidney not painted out as a good guy. Write more soon please. :)