December 25th, 2010 at 05:32pm
Striptease - Comments
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Gah, I love this already. :) Glad you used a Hinder song. I absolutely adore them, especially Striptease. Austin Winkler is such a horny, naughty lil' bastard isn't he? xD Great start on the story though! :)December 25th, 2010 at 01:01pm
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Kayla, I love you for this.
This is SUPER good so far. I'm going crazy waiting for the next update, because you left me hanging with what's gonna happen with Matt. As stated before, ZV's personality is super cute.
And I love the characterization you have set up already. I love you, and me, and ZV, the body guards (The Berrys?), and what I've seen of Matt. 
The first chapter was just amazing and you're writing is so eautiful! <3 I love you so much. Thanks times eight trillion! December 25th, 2010 at 06:18am
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