Of Love And Broken Toes - Comments

Oh my gosh I love this story sooo much! It is so incredibly sweet and cute! :D

I love this story it's so funny and sweet at the same time. When I reading this throughout the whole time I was like just they need to get together already.

So glad to see you back. Ah this was so cute and she told him the truth about wishing it was him. I only wish the chapters would be longer. Anyway though it was so cute. Can't wait for them to get together. Great job on the chapter.

Awww how cute, James was jealous!!! And Faye REALLY has some messed up parents haha

GAH! they are SO PERFECT together I'm SO FREAKING jealous, but it was a marvelous chapter :D yup it was :D

AHHHH I'M SEMI BACK AND I CAN'T BELIEVE I MISSED SOOOO MUCH!!! I FRIGGIN' LOVED CHAPTER 23 AND 24. But especially 23! That "They say dancing is just a conversation between two people, so talk to me" it seriously almost made me melt when I read it, best quote EVER!!! And I had such a hard time deciding between Fayne and Marcella but in the end I have to say Fay wore it best. She had the better hair and accessories to go with it. Lastly, before I forget... LOVE?

So cute. And yes it's love true love. And they got it bad.

He does love her and she is too blind to see that she loves him as well :)

So cute! I love it! Sorry I forgot to comment yesterday more soon I hope

And I also realllllyyyy loved the way James looked at her, and looked at Marcela like she was any other girl...that says so much more than anything else. perfect. Also, the moment between her & her father was heart-pulling. I know what that's like too, so whenever you get a glimpse of how it used to be....it's so nice. and kind of sad. It was a perfect moment.

I'm not sure either one of them dressed better then the other, but I did look at the photos and everything, and I think both of the girls wore which really suited them. And I really loved that heart necklace. One of those moments in which you draw in your breath, you know? Was it on a website for sale or something??

I loved the chapter !!!!! AMAZING !!! James is such a gentlemen !! :)

I just loved this chapter. Everything was perfect. The song. The outfits. And the have Fay's dad and her have that small special moment made me smile. Then have James react the way he did was just so cute. He got tongue tied and oh it was just too cute. I really like this chapter. And I really like them as a couple.

Ahhh loved this chapter <3 i honestly liked Fay's dress better but it's only cause i really like blue xD and its great to see someone who likes Safetysuit! I love them <3 anyway please update soon!

They should totally get in a fight everyone loves a good chick fight and then they should be friends. And James should totally be the one to break up the fight and make sure that Fay is alright before marcela. Ah can't wait!!!!! They are SO cute together!!!!

Haha that is soo sad that Marcela put Fay on blast like that!! It really does look like she has no choice now :D That would be hilarious if she and Marcela got down. Fay's mum would be super pissed but it would be GREAT.
MAGNIFICENT CHAPTER JUST MAGNIFICENT DARLING lol :)
Gala chapter woot woot!!

I say friends :D AH I'm excited for the Gala :D AH now she has to go with him! :D and she knows she wasn't his last choice! :D more of his first :D

Piggy back. Bridal can be so uncomfortable if you don't get situated right the first time. And then when you're up in the air there's no fixing it, lol.

Aww James is just sooo sweet! I want one :(
If I were Fay I'd definitely go with the bridal style. She close to his chest not to mention those wonderful pecks haha!! :D
Love love love this update. You keep up the great work girlie!!

Oh so cute. This really makes me want to have a guy that's like that. One day I will. I hope. Anyway I don't know what I would have choosen. There are perks from both. With bridal you get to see there face and be in their arms and everything but piggy back you can hold on super tight and just feel there warmth. That would be a hard one to choose. My friend said bridal though because if they really like eachother then they could kiss eachother.