i LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE the new layout!!!! I don't know about the whole patch-up thing. It was nice that it happened but I felt it was a little forced. But it was good. I'm glad they're all happy now :)
Muahahahahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!! "Because you, Faye Winters, you kissed me back." Most Epic Line In the Whooe Story!!!!! I loved it <3 Gah, you rock!!!!
It was not terrible by any standards I thought it fit PERFECTLY and please let her tell him she likes him :) dude I LOVE IT :D please tell me you are going to update soon :D cause it would make me ecstatic :D
this is the SWEETEST THING EVER!!! ok Marco is AWSOME I wish that dude was my friend and James GO HIM for just not really listening and kissing her :D please say you're updating soon cause this story is GREAT!!! :D love worldclass cause she is why I know about this... I think I need to steal her subscriptions list
Yeah I really hope that's James that kissed her but like the person who commented before me it probly is. :) Yay! haha I love this update soon. so cute(:
"just keep basking in your river of denial" hahaha. love that line!
If that's not James, I will cry. But assuming it is James, I will say that he ROCKS for not listening to her tell him to leave. To be honest, the first thing that went through my mind was "DON'T STEP ON THE GLASS!" but maybe these people wear shoes in the house...idk.
Ah...well...I can't really comment because my kiss scenes suck, too, lol. But, yeah. Can't wait for Fay's reaction. It better be positive!!! Unless that's not James... o.0 But I don't see who else it could be.
I love the river comment! Definitely using that some day :) Oh, gosh. James and Fay, lol. Marco seems a little too perfect. Not to the extent that I think he's a backstabbing guy. Just that he's a bit too perfect.
Oooooh SNAP! can't wait to see what happens at the BBQ. Faye's probably not the overtly jealous type, right? Well, even if she was, I doubt her pride would let her do anything stupid. She and James need to get together soon! Once they've realized how awesome they'd be together :)