Apple Pie Wall and the Shapely Frenzy - Comments

I like it!

Haha, loving it:) Good killjoy story... Love how in chap 1,
Frank talks his thoughts out without noticing:) Gerard
was probably enjoying him says he was beautiful;;)
Update soon please:)

xo
Anita:)

Normally, I know I give you really long comments, but... I can't be bothered right now.
Good chapter, tally-ho, keep on writing.

Rather amusing image of Frank without his jeans falling out of bed lol. Party Poison's never fired a raygun? Oh my, he's got a hell of a lot of catching up to do. I liked the idea that the Dracs tally their killings, useful information but also a startling insight into their lives. I love this, I do. I'd like to marry it, okay, thanks lol.

amazing is all i gotta say :D

No it isn't bad!!!!!! PLEASE update!!! :'( don't make me sad!

someone (by that i mean you) reaaaaly needs to update^.^!

No, I knew it was a good thing... I was just saying that it was a good thing that it was a good thing... if you get what I mean? Because I've totally lost my thought, lol.

Sorry... but this has to be done...

KISSY KISSY!!!!

Lol, yes, it was rather quick, indeed, and I understand your thing about plot, I sometimes want to rush the hell out of it too, but it worked for these two. Me likey.

Also... Show Pony and Mikey holding hands, all together now, 'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!' Looking forward to a Show Pony point of view, I wonder what goes on in that head!

The beginning paragraph was beautiful, as always. Updates always make me happy. Haha, I like the human interaction between them, it's always really real and not all cliché. Kissing and thinking :D Never works!
I like how he watched him sleep too, haha, not creepy at all.
Uhm, yeah. Barefoot.

This was written even better than the last chapter. Your writing really improves every chapter. The end was descriptive, delicious, and generally wonderful in the way it was written. I especially enjoyed how you tied the induction into their dialogue later, "taking risks," as it were.
Need an extra message, but I feel really sick and we have to run the stupid mile tomorrow. I know I can run a mile in under six minutes, but I can't with no incline, grr. Seeya in gym.
It was a crackhead, got hisself on the wrong stuff.

I was just curious... which is the sign of a good plot, leave your reader asking questions! Awww, what a reunion so damn sweet. Loved how awkward that was though... Lost loves? Lol. Hold up, wait a minute (put a little love in it?) Are you insinuating Mikey and Show Pony... Together? As lovers? If you do that will make my year, yum. Odd thought. Right, more now, please, with frerard on top :D

Reunion! I like the way that was written a lot better than the previous chapters. It was a lot more expanded and substantial. I also liked how you introduced Dr. D's character a lot. It was kickass and enigmatic as all hell. Mikey and Pony <3
Right. Need extra message. Good luck at the TAMY's! Uhm. Yeah. (One sided conversation much?) Need more filler for long comment. Oh! I liked that Frank was subtly jealous and relieved when he found out they were brothers. David Bowie FTW. And I like that Dr. D said "the familia" it makes it sound like a big gang :)
Ameteur sketch, darling.

I love you!!! And the story but mostly i love you!!! =D

Love Love Love.! this story.! :D

Wow this is epic. I liked the little nod to music there, I always wondered what BLInd would end up controlling and phasing out. So I wonder why Gerard and Mikey weren’t together... did Mikey run before Gerard? Or did he disappear? More pleas.

yay! Mikey!!!! Just want to say i'm liking this so far. Its a little different from most killjoy stories so it'll be interesting to see where you go with this. :)

YAY!!! I LOVES!!!! MIKEY IS SO CLUMSY IT'S FUCKING ADORABLE!!!

J'adore le chapitre :) This was actually a great chapter, despite your text to the contrary. I think it was well plotted and the descriptive bit at the beginning was well done. I like how you introduced Mikey's character and the whole WKIL stuff. It was clearly pretty well planned, and the fact that Gaga pulled a disappearing act made perfect sense.
Ahhhh. I have no extra message because we're currently texting. That's obnoxious. I'm never going to text you again while I read your story, because then I never have anything good to say. It ruins the surprise. Oh, and I'm going to run by your house on my route tomorrow, rain or shine (unless you're busy, in which case I will find some other way to stalk you). I would appreciate tea if it is raining :D And if we do yoga tomorrow we must be on the other side of the room from that... obnoxiously loud person whose voice is so annoying to the ears of all *cough cough starts with a C.*

That was awesome

My beautiful, bodacious, and sexy woman you whipping out wonderful chapters for us...... I feel so fucking special! ={D (it has a mustache!)