Talk About the Past - Comments

I love it. Update? :3

Wicked!! Update soon? =] * Subscribing!*

Awesome, Subscribe. :)

I anticipate the next part! Alluring is the word I would use to describe your story!

AMAZING!!!! Can't wait for more..

OMG Aliya..seriously, this is the most intriguing story you've written to date. Your writing has grown along with you, and I'm so proud. It feels like I'm reading an actual legit novel, and all your funky characters captured my heart. Crazy names, like everyone said, but I love them, haha. Unique.

This has been really good! Its intriguing and it has an aura of mystery about it. I can't wait to read more!

Love the names too! Very unique.

Eeeep, I love it. <3
I'm definitely intrigued and you have my attention.
I agree with damian wayne, you definitely have the skills for great characterization that you've already displayed.
I'm really curious to see how this will all play out.
I'm subscribing. c:

Great layout. :)

I think there's too much telling instead of showing.

Also, those are some crazy names. :)

Anyways, great job it sounds pretty awesome. Keep up the great work it's a great topic and you're displaying it really well. :)

I liked this as soon as I saw the layout and the description, or I suspected I’d like it. Your writing is wonderful, the wording and how the narrative flowed. I liked the strength of the voice and how natural it all seems. I also think you have the dialogue down with distinct voices and what not and that really says anything I could say about characterization.

This is a really brilliant story :D
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I loved this, it wasn't boring and quiet wonderful! + subscribing.

I really like this :D