Social Suicide - Comments

I love this. it's brilliant.

I was right! It was Tony! I'm starting to feel bad for Dee Dx

Thank the lamas it Tony! I don't know why, but I was expecting worse... like Austin... no idea why! O.O I'm so glad I was wrong XD

I'm loving this story! Please update soon!

I love this story, it's completely amazing.
:)

Woaaah.. Wasn't expecting that =O

Great update :)

Is this Mia a Me-ah or a My-ah? By the way, it's a really good story!

I love this story!
Cant wait for the next update :)

LOVE IT. Gosh, Austin is a bit of a babe ;)
Its all starting to get Mean Girlsy, and im soo ready for some sly remarks and bitchyness ;D
Greaaat update! :D

just discovered this story and I love it so far (: can't wait till the next update!

Actually I did see that coming! xD Let the social suicide begin xD

Oh. My. FREAKING. God!!
This. Is. Amazing!
Defineatly one of my current favorites on here. This is honestly the best written story I've read like this!! Mind you it's quite origiinal and I think Ive only read one variation of this and this is wayyy better! I seriously love this! It's so awesome. I think I know what Austin did to Dees older sister that got him degradad ohhhhh its so exciting :D anyway!! I hope this encourages you to keep writing :D
eka <3:D

OH god I finally finished this and I must say its great. I love it! Yeah I might feel bad for Dee later if this plan works but I think she might accept it. I know Dee wants Tony but she better not be seeing Austin cause then I'll be sad. I have a hinkering feeling that Austin might be the one that had something to do with Dee's sister. I hope this plan works out. keep updating xD.

-Nana

Oh Oh! Damn you, cliffhanger! xD.
Wonderful story, I love it! Amelia is a sweetheart ;3 I love the direction youre going with this, and I cant wait for your next update! :D <3

Amazing.
It's exactly how I pictured it and them some :)
I'm really loving where it's going!

omg!!! Dee is just following her sister! :O
I think I might feel a little bad for Dee when Amelia ruins the whole social corruption going on there . . . getting to know Dee better is a really good part for the story, I think! :]

Wow! I totally love this story, it's amazing! ;D
Update soon, I want to read more.

Awesome update! you definitely got me hooked now!
I love the way you write, its extremely fun and easy to read, yet appears well thought through and high standard! Not a lot of authors manage that.
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!

Good update it seems as though the fun will began soon. Can't wait for another update : )
-Brianna

I just looooove this story more!
And of course, my favorite, Omar! It's so cute that he cares for the little blond angel so much!
Omigosh! Amelia better be realllllyyyy careful! If they ever figure out it was her, they'd turn it on her and say she was a total bitch, when she's really just trying to break the bitchy social standings there!
Only a bitch can break a bitch I guess.... x]
Lol, jk. Mia has good intentions at heart. She could never be one. :]

beautifully orchestrated. the only thing to mind is your tenses: "Zack and Mia were both tense, from their heated discussion at lunch. It appeared, Mia refused to accept that East Side High was programmed". versus "Erin sighs and runs her hand through her silky blond hair." The first is past, the second present. Generally, when people write, they tend to use the past (first example) because it's less awkward to read. For example the second could read "Erin sighed and ran her hand through her silky blond hair." This is just constructive! If you don't want too, that's fine. You're the author!