So today I read your story 'Daddys Little Girl' and I fell in love with your writting (and that story). You never miss a detail in your writing. As for this story I'm gonna have to say I'm in love with it, the idea ia orignal and writing is very well thought out. I know it was missNerd17 ideas as you said so I guess I should compliemtnt her for that so, but your writing defintly makes it easy and fun to read. Can't wait to see what happens next! -Brianna
Love it! keep them coming! I've loved it from the start, so don't feel too pressured to move on with the story. From what i've noticed is that when authors do that they tend to focus too much on competing the story, and less on the quality. If you have fun writing it, we'll have fun reading it.
I cannot wait until the next chapter! This is a really good story. I think Omar is my favorite right now. My brother is autistic, too, though he's not really that shy . . . but I love those kids! They're so innocent and intellegent! :] Albert Einstein had autism . . . I forget which kind, though. Anyway, yeah. I really love your story! I bet school is going to be a mess for her, though... I hope not!! D: