Twisted Returns - Comments

I think Dana should have done the right thing and died. But then, of course, there wouldn't be a story anymore.
Also, when she was listing the people she saw dead, I wonder why she didn't list Conner...

OKAY THIS IS PERFECTION IN A CHAPTER.

YOU ARE A BEAUTIFUL WRITER.

KAY WRITE MORE.

Wait is that the end? She dies??? :| thatsucks...

Well i loved sc and tr I read it all from the begining
And, i loved it..she shoulda picked fate I guess..oh well,
Srry connor :p

BALLFACE BALLFACE BALLFACE BALLFACE.

YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSED TO MAKE MY FACE DO THAT.

1. Why do you think the place is empty? No one's supposed to be there.
2. Now, where have you seen this flashback scene before? (props to whoever knows...)I can't remember..
3. What do you think of the flashback? It's nice c:

1. Will Lorraine always be like this? Yes.
2. Do you think they will lose the war? Yes.
3. What does Dean mean at the end? I'm not completely sure..

1. Do you think Marigold did the right thing? Uhm, suree..
2. Do you think that their theories of Marigold being on the bad side are correct? It is quite possible.
3. Can she be trusted? Not right noww.

It's like no one even cares if she dies besides Dean. Who are these heartless people?!?!
Anyway, I love you~ :)

this is terrible agalskgja

please tell me she lives.

please.

OH MY GODDDDD.

NO NO NO SHE'S NOT DYING.

girl i want to hit you. >.< just kidding i love you.

Srry but...BULLSHITTT!!!! Diana cant die! She and
Dean need 3kids!!! At least!!

thoughts, well I really wanna know what will happen next.

1. maybe there are bad people in it
2. I don't know
3. cute

1. No
2. maybe
3. That they will learn something from the necklace from Connor

1. If she is on the good side, then yes
2. no but they could be
3. not 100 percent trusted

Not expected, I love that about your stories =)... I accidentally read "I killed them" before I read the chapter when I was looking at the authors comment and I thought who ever was saying it was talking about killing all the the Terrans. I was like Wtf!!

I like the stories, I LOVED the stories,
I wonder if Dana is gonna kill herself too:3

1. I knowwwwwwwwww:3 Noope.. Not really. it holds her magic ?
2. Marigold
3. That's for you to tell ! Silly.

I like the milestone, do I get to know her story in the next chapter?

1. uhmmmm.... how am I supposed to know?
2. Marigold?
3. idk but obviously she will find something important in it