Twisted Returns - Comments

1. Yes.
2. Yep
3. Nuh uh

1. Not parties, but you know whatsies(;
2. It's going to kill her inside and out.
3. Uhoh spaghettios.

1. Is Elise doing the right thing?
I think so...it's good to stand up for what you believe in.

2. Will she get hurt in the process?
Yeah, I think she's going to die...probably quickly, all things considered...

3. Should Dana go?
Yes, and no...it would be good to rally everyone (kind of reminds me of Hunger Games, by the way...Katniss vs. Diana), but at the same time it's risky. Comme ci comme ca. J'adore.

You messed up the coding at the end, so the whole bottom section is italicized. Just letting you know. OH. And I like the name you came up with for them :) Kbyee <3

1. What would you do if you had a room like this?
PARTY IT UP ALL NIGHT LONG.

2. What is the memory of Aaron going to do to Elise, on top of her sisters' deaths?
Elise is going to go crazy, run into battle, and die. That's my prediction.

3. What will happen when they start in the morning?
They will all die.

I know. I have amazing predicting skills. You be jealous. And, also, this is an okay chapter, but I know you can do better. And there were a few typos. That is all. <3

1. What do you think of it?
Kinda cool...but not a lot of action. Seemed to be a bit of a filler at first (to me) but I know that there are vital details in there that are important to the rest of the story. Blahblahblah. Always. :P

2. Is Lorraine still 'the one' for Cody?
I don't know...maybe? Maybe Lorraine is still the one for Cody, but I don't know about Johnny. Crys was "the one" for him, but since Lorraine is still Lorraine, will she not be Crys enough for Johnny? Questions, questions...I like the paradoxicalness of it all.

3. What do you think happens next?
People die...I will be sad...you will laugh at my sadness...oh? In the story? I think that you are going to kill off my favorite people and Marigold iks going to make Diana fight because of her powers. Yes.

So far, so good :) But you need to use some oxymoron so that I can say oxymoron more often :P hahaa say like "boring excitement" or "ugly beauty" or "peaceful battle" or something. I dunno. Just do it. <3

1. That was expected.
2. Lorraine is the one for Cody, but Crystalline is the one for Johnny.
3. Dunno.

1.Yepp.
2. Nuh uh):
3. I don't really know..

1. NO, and yes it was.
2. Sure.
3. Secrets..

1. Duh.
2. They're not leftover): They're still theree.
3. No. nonononononono.

1. Do you think Cody used girls in his past life?
I think he did...it kinda goes with his original personality from sc if you think about it a bit...and he just seems the type.

2. Would you use the weapons?
DUUUH. they're amazing.

3. What does Cody mean when he says "for Connor"?
No idea...but it had a nice effect(:

loving it babe <3 I like the details(:

Katalina and lloriane made mistakes I think. I though Katalina wouldn't changed to her hold self.
And please update again! I LOVE THIS BOOOOK!!!!

1. Did Katalina make the right choice and was it expected?
No. She's a stupid, conceited, and self-centered b***** who had an amazing opportunity to become who she really was and she let it go because she wanted to be prettier. Damn model. Get some brains.

2. Do you want to read the Legend of the Earthborn? (PM me, I can send you it.)
YES PLEASE. I think you've told it to me before, but I forget to PM it to me :) <3 That way I can save it forever.

3. What could Marigold possibly be keeping from her?
Is it something about her past? Or Diana's past? Is it the thingy about the person on the planet and the love and the battle and the tragedy and the "oh no we can't have another" story? Because that was a good one.

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BY THE WAY. I think you should add more details. Just because you know the whole story and all of the little details, doesn't mean that the readers do, too, you know? So, like, instead of just mentioning and over viewing the legend, you could actually tell it. And with the people, maybe you could give a bit of background for each? Tell us their powers? Tell us a little more about the situation? This chapter was good, but it could use something more like that. I need clarification. DETAILSDETAILSDETAILS.

ooooh nooooo i messed up the bold at the ennnnnnd. i fail. blah.

1. Was Amber who you expected her to be?
Yup :) I was exactly right (look at my comment from awhile back...it's true!!!!!)

2. What do you think of the leftover feelings Dana has for Dean?
They might not quite be "leftover" like you say, since Diana and Charles were going to be married... now that she's Diana again and he's Charles... maybe the feelings should stay. I mean, things would be much easier that way, considering if she doesn't get over Connor she'll be a miserable wench for the rest of her life. But if she falls for Charles all over again it will be happily ever after... for like five minutes before he #$%^&* (I won't ruin the story, don't worry ;)

3. Did Lorraine do what you thought she would?[/b[
Yeaaah because you already ruined the surprise for me **blaaahblaaahyouaskedforititchyyyblaaah. i don't care.**

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Loving the plot :) I'm happy that she's back as Diana now, so it'll get even spicier ;) <3

1. Was Amber who you expected her to be?
no, because she isn't diana's brother from another mother.

2. What do you think of the leftover feelings Dana has for Dean?
she's falling for the wrong guy. she should be marrying that table, i mean, come on.

3. Did Lorraine do what you thought she would?
...sure. why not.

1. Why can't I think of any good questions?
Because you've run out of good ideas on this story.

2. Would you fight in this war?
HAHA no. I wouldn't be any help...I'd probably end up shooting everyone on my side with an out of control machine gun or something.

3. What do you think of this training room?
Pretty damn sweet. Wish I had one in my bedroom...but I wouldn't use it to train...I'd use it to, like, go to Bermuda for awhile or something ;) <3

So far so good, my love.

1. Why can't I think of any good questions?
because you never come to school anymore.

2. Would you fight in this war?
of course. i'd be kicking butt and taking names. as usual. ;)

3. What do you think of this training room?
its awesome, only because Katie is there.

1. Cause you live in a box.
2. I think my character answered that for me.
3. Quite scary I think.

1.LOVE IT.
2. Horrible.
3. Idunno

Side note - Diana barely said anything in thiso;

1. yeah
2. good, spent it with my fiancee
3. I don't know..
Cody is from Glitteria and his name is actually Johnny. That made me laugh...does he sparkle like glitter?