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  • Disaster_Devil

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    February 1st, 2011 at 04:33am
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    I feel freaken horrible for not commenting! Dude you deserve a freaken reward for your writing! So i'm going to give you one! :DDDDDD
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:33am
  • The Walrus

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    Dude, this rally. I want to be there.
    So, so bad.
    Another wonderful chapter, and I can't wait for the next one.
    I love how you've made Show Pony a bigger player, and he has an excellent personality. <3
    AND THERE WAS A LOT OF MIKEY IN THIS. I LIKE THAT.
    February 1st, 2011 at 02:58am
  • wonderland can wait

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    Favorite chapter, I'm in love!
    There's actually a festival in India like that, in case you were unaware.
    February 1st, 2011 at 02:51am
  • stay weird

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    Awe poor Kin but at least the guys and Harley are there to ease her mind. Crunchy, you've got me super excited for this whole rally thing and I don't even know what it is but it sounds freaking exciting. Now I am just gonna sit here and pout b/c I know whatever it is is going to be super awesome and I can't join. D: You better update soon b/c I want more. :D
    January 31st, 2011 at 08:40am
  • BoWs

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    Okay so my mind has fucking been blown.... {I should actually clean it from the celing now it's starting to drip} Kinda a big thing for only 18 chapters of plot line already but i'm infatuated with the whole dam thing. I can't wait to read more, i'm crazy for it.

    xx [ hugs are for losers]
    'bows'
    January 31st, 2011 at 06:29am
  • nobody of importance

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    It's really late here... 11 pm... I wake up at 4:30 for school, and was doing a last 'let me just see what's in my inbox' check... I was fine, until I saw this was updated XD
    No worries, I'll make up for feeding my addiction by sleeping in chemistry XD
    Dude, I love how they broke in. I just imagined Korse stomping around like an angry five-year-old, red-faced and yelling "Graaaah!!" as Dracs followed his through the Zones in the middle of nowhere. He had sunscreen all over his nose, and sunburn on his chrome dome XD
    What's the rally for? Please update! PLEASE!
    I'll love you forever =D
    ...Ima guess... Ima guess... The rally is being put on by the Fabulous Killjoys themselves, indicting Harley & Kin as official Fab Killjoys? XD I swear, I live to guess (incorrectly) at your fantabulous story XD
    XOXO
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    January 31st, 2011 at 04:24am
  • folk you please

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    Woo.
    That is all. :D
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:11am
  • katsing96

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    OMG!!! I await the next chapter anxiously!!!! LMAO!!!! Keep up the good writing!!!
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:10am
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    Awesome!! :D
    I'm glad Kin isn't completely out of it ;)
    Now I'm excited for this rally thing!!! What is it!!?? :D
    Can't wait for another update!! :D
    -V ;)
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:45am
  • The Walrus

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    Ooh, rally?
    Another wonderful chapter, darling. And an awesome author's note.
    I'm excited for this rally. Update soon!
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:41am
  • nobody of importance

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    ...I was wrong. *hangs head in shame* XD
    DUDE! I love you, you're absolutely BRILLIANT! I couldn't ever come up with something like that!
    Gaah, they have to go save her! And I wanna hear the break-in story =D
    ...I'll give this 'predicting' thing one more shot; Kindred's mom won't be there when they break back in to save her? XD
    XOXO
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    January 30th, 2011 at 06:16am
  • The Walrus

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    This is amazingly amazing. <3
    It took two days for me to read it all, but it was worth it. Oh, was it worth it.
    I'm whoring this out in chapter 5 of my Killjoy story, just because I have a story to link/whore in my next update.
    Amazing.
    I'm subscribing. <3
    January 30th, 2011 at 12:32am
  • folk you please

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    God this is so good. The characters are so well developed, and the way that you describe a scene is so realistic. I've wanted to write a Killjoy fic for a while now, but I would never be able to pull it off as well as you. Fr rlz.

    Keep being awesome and update this baby soon.
    January 29th, 2011 at 08:59pm
  • deathXbeforeXdisco

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    YOU MADE ME CRY!
    I finally got internet after a week without and I get these fucking MASTERPIECES.
    I had NO idea about it being Kin's mum though! Magnificent writing! Truly amazing!
    For a second I was wondering about why Kin's mum looked slightly familiar to Mikey and I was wondering if by some strange and literally impossible cosmic accident he was actually Kin's father or something and had an affair with Kin's mother or something and then I realised, DUH, of course Kin is going to at least have some features of her mother. IQ=Fishies
    I honestly don't know what to say. I was like 2 inches away from the computer screen trying to push my eyes beyond the speed of light so I could read more and then it came to the end of the updates and I was like. Oh my God! No! Must be more! Need more! And I was upset.
    And I cried like a baby. I had tears dribbling down my face and I was sniffling and my parents asked me why I was crying and if I was in any pain.
    And why did Nic have to die? He was awesome! :( Freak's so strong, I could never be as strong as her. I love your characters, they're all so awesome. I thought it was so cute that Grace was so worried about her.
    Mikey's so sweet to her too. I laughed when she was playing with Ray's fingers. Incidentally I do that when I'm bored too. I know that sounds kinda creepy/weird but *shrugs*
    Anyway, I really can't put into words how much I love your writing/updates. They truly are amazing beyond words. And unfortunately I don't have the time to write everything I wanted to say about these updates.
    A-fuckin'-mazing <3 A++++++++++++(times infinity XD)
    January 29th, 2011 at 03:07pm
  • stay weird

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    HOLY CRAP! O_O Definitely not what I was expecting but I think it just made it that much better to find out who it actually was. Now you have got me sitting on edge waiting to see what they are going to do to get her mom back. Update soon Crunchy, I need more. <3
    January 29th, 2011 at 07:59am
  • HelloIt'sLee

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    That was awesome! :D
    I like how strong she is. It's really sad and she's being really tough. It's nice.
    Wow, that was definitely not what I expected! lol, nice surprise! Never even thought of Kin's mum. :P
    Update more when you can! Your story is so awesome!!!! :D
    -V ;)
    ps- I love Mikey ;)
    January 29th, 2011 at 06:27am
  • It'sMyTime

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    Woah you really threw me off! I thought for sure that lady would be Mikey's wife!
    January 29th, 2011 at 05:50am
  • katsing96

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    And I was really hoping it would be Mikey's wife!!! Oh well!! Great update!!! Can't wait for the next one!!!
    January 29th, 2011 at 05:33am