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  • Vixyn of Shadows

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    Such an amazing sad story. I always loved this one
    March 13th, 2011 at 09:27am
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    Oh daaaaamn!
    That ending was... that was sooo saaad!
    I actually felt myself frowning and such.
    Brian at the grave, talking... oh! I could picture it so well.
    But I think the ending was suuuper perfect. Zacky getting rid of the ring. Idk, it just meshed well.

    Overall, great fricking job with the story!!! :))
    CanNOT wait for the next story, though ;) *hint hint, wink wink* Haha.
    March 10th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Kalei Gates

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    amazing story my dear =) i felt tears stinging as i read it...a beautiful ending to a-fuckin-mazing story.
    March 9th, 2011 at 08:38pm
  • PaleIsSexy

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    Amazingggg!!! You did a great job, I honestly felt like I was there with them while reading[:.
    March 8th, 2011 at 03:49am
  • TheWistler

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    This was so good!
    I cried, almost couldn't read some parts of the last chapter because they made me so sad
    March 7th, 2011 at 06:53pm
  • xosteph

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    I just sat and read through the whole story. This is a really good story and really well written.

    I don't usually cry at sad endings, unless they are really well written but I was definitely in tears by the end of this story. So sad that he didn't get to ask her to be his fiancée.
    March 7th, 2011 at 05:32pm
  • mrgn94cb

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    I just cried! I canT believe this story has come to and end! This is one of my fav. stories and i am really sad that this is the end!!! How this story was written was amazing. Though i dont love that she died i think that it was a good idea and the aftermath to the death most people cant really write it well but u did a great job!!! Love this story!!!!!
    March 7th, 2011 at 01:06pm
  • KellShadows

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    I can't believe the story is over! =( This was one of my favorite stories, and I loved reading it.
    March 7th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • heytheredelilah

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    I've never been one to cry at sad endings or the really emotional stuff, but this last chapter had tears flowing. This is one wonderful story, and I am so glad I was able to find it and read along as you developed each and every idea. Good job hun. This was probably one of the best stories I've read on this website.
    March 7th, 2011 at 07:55am
  • MoonChild2

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    It's a good story. I almost cried. Good job
    March 6th, 2011 at 12:27am
  • bloodravyn

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    how could u kill her?!
    March 5th, 2011 at 02:06pm
  • shelbyvengeance

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    That's so sad. I feel sorry for Brian and Zacky.
    March 2nd, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • KannibleKarlee

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    I actually cried at the end of this story its so sad :'(

    It's an amazing story though really puts into prospective what happens in the world :) Keep up the good writting skills
    March 2nd, 2011 at 02:14pm
  • figwmwrtbb

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    Oh my God. This made me almost cry T~T
    Poor Bri :(
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm
  • jaylon1134

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    this is a great story and im sad its coming to an end
    March 2nd, 2011 at 01:55pm